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09/18/2005 11:28:11 PM |
| the glare on the top of her head is distracting from the beauty of the picture |
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09/18/2005 12:23:45 AM |
| This would improve tenfold if the sun were at your back and not hers. Lovely model, nice focus and all, but the harsh contrasts in her hair and behind her really draw the attention away from her. |
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09/15/2005 11:56:32 PM |
| The background seems out of place. A smile wouldn't hurt either. |
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09/15/2005 10:39:19 PM |
| Aside from my eyes thinking there is a tree growing out of the top of her head (from the background), a nice photo of a pretty woman. She does indeed...sparkle. |
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09/15/2005 09:04:45 PM |
| i like the use of the sun as a backlight but she doesnt seem too enthused about getting her picture taken..and the sikewalk is a bit distracting... |
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09/15/2005 11:09:49 AM |
| gorgeous model. distracting background, though. good job, nonetheless |
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09/15/2005 07:36:51 AM |
| model looks completely disinterested |
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09/14/2005 12:21:52 PM |
| The model is stunning you captured her eyes wonderfully. The back ground however takes away from the overall effect. |
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09/14/2005 02:23:01 AM |
| Beautiful model, but the background and the light hitting her so harshly in the top of her head are really hurting the photo. |
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09/13/2005 08:08:05 PM |
| really like the model and her hair-excellent for portraits. She needs to be smiling sincerely, better lighting on her and find a better background. |
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09/13/2005 03:36:08 PM |
| Beautiful model, but backround is too busy, and lighting bouncing off head is distracting. |
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09/13/2005 01:56:44 PM |
This is a lovely lady, but I would like see more focus on her freatures and less on the background and apparel. She is dark in comparison to the background and my eyes are first drawn to the bright green in the sunshine. Her eyes kind of get lost as the lighting on her is all evenly dark. Her expression also doesn't seem to fit with what she's wearing. With sparkle and cleavage like that I would like to see a more playful, sexy look. She just seems bored to me here. Also, although she appears to be very tan, the tone seems very red hued.
She's a lovely model and hopefully you'll have the chance to keep working with her to practice more portrait work. Just one woman's opinion but I hope this is helpful. |
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09/12/2005 07:12:49 PM |
| Try not to have objects in the background unless they relate to the subject. The tree behind her head and the path take away from the pose. |
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09/12/2005 03:09:20 PM |
| I like the shot very much, but the cropping should have beena the bottom of the neckless, what do ya want us to looat her face or....I say her face :) |
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09/12/2005 02:53:51 PM |
| Maybe shouldn't have cropped off half of one arm |
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09/12/2005 02:46:41 PM |
| I appreciate the efforts here, but your model is over tanned, and over blinged. Too much going on with her look. Sometimes less is more. Background needed to be simpler also, less sidewalk. The lighting is good though. |
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09/12/2005 12:41:19 PM |
| Oh dear, this has such potential but that background really kind of ruins it for me :-( The subject has such great eyes but they stuggle too much with that bright green. |
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09/12/2005 10:57:59 AM |
| Your portrait is great - nice detail and pose. Your background however is distracting - the bright light on the grass and trees pulls my eye away from your subject. |
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09/12/2005 01:45:13 AM |
| Beautiful eyes, but I would like to see a smile to really make her sparkle. |
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09/12/2005 12:55:08 AM |
| Beautiful model, however with all the glitz, and glamour she would of been better suited for a background that housed expensive champagne or something a little more exquisite. I think the moods contrast in a nutshell, but still a good photo. |
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