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09/23/2005 03:27:42 PM |
I like the concept of this shot but I think there are elements of the shot that detract from your theme. I think the eye is drawn away from the subject to the bright spot on the floor. Then there is the dark negative space above it that serves no purpose, IMHO. If you had set the shot up so that the shoe and other clothing were lit by the light pouring in on the floor, it would be a good starting point. Then if you could position it such that the shoe leads the eye to the slightly OOF female it would have greater impact.
*edit: FWIW, I don't believe it deserved the final score it received.
Message edited by author 2005-09-23 15:28:41. |
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09/22/2005 04:22:50 PM |
| Thank you Silience, that is helpfull. |
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09/22/2005 09:43:39 AM |
Alright let me say something, I wasn't in the best mood when I posted the last one... and I didn't even really understand what I was saying.
Look the problems I see with this picture is that the naked woman distracts the picture too much, I think I understand the message you were trying to put across... but I saw this concept several times before I got to your picture, and the images before always set the tone for the rest.
As for me saying "The prespective is stupid" What I should have side is that it's not strong... It would be much better if you had put the show to the left, so that you went from the shoe to the naked woman.. then she would seem more like part of the image, then and after thoguht.
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09/21/2005 11:40:55 PM |
Originally posted by amyrh:
I dont really like this picture especiallt since there is a naked woman in the background. |
I really like this picture especially since there is a naked woman in the background.
Sorry, could resist...nice photo. |
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09/21/2005 11:14:58 PM |
| Nice shot and good interpretation of challenge. |
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09/20/2005 08:19:14 PM |
| I dont really like this picture especiallt since there is a naked woman in the background. |
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09/19/2005 04:14:47 PM |
| ......ahhh....good one...very very good...fabulous light and narration...very well done. |
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09/15/2005 09:29:12 PM |
| The picture is so dark I had a hard time figuring it out |
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09/14/2005 11:16:00 PM |
| hmm. I'll take a guess and say that doc guy, possibly grigrigirl. |
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09/14/2005 10:42:34 PM |
| Very dramatic image--I like it and great perspective too. The lighting is cool too. |
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09/14/2005 08:53:31 PM |
EW. I really don't like the way you were thinking here. the naked girl is such a turn off.. -1- It isn't perspective. IT'S PORNO.
Message edited by kirbic - Edited to remove personal attacks. |
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09/14/2005 01:25:02 PM |
| Not exactly sure what I am looking at here but I do see a nice round boob in the background. |
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09/14/2005 07:52:49 AM |
| This is a really stupid picture, it's an over done concept... THere is no need for the nude, and the perspective is stupid. |
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09/14/2005 01:00:25 AM |
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