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Little Smile
Little Smile
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Challenge: Color Portrait (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF 50mm f/1.8 II
Location: Outside @ my home
Date: Sep 11, 2005
Aperture: f/2,8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/2500sec
Galleries: Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Sep 11, 2005

Levels,Unsharp mask.crop,Burn,Dodge on her eyes
High pass soft light. '+
All i could do :)

Statistics
Place: 167 out of 284
Avg (all users): 5.1503
Avg (commenters): 5.6667
Avg (participants): 4.9851
Avg (non-participants): 5.2961
Views since voting: 845
Views during voting: 424
Votes: 286
Comments: 14
Favorites: 0


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09/21/2005 11:21:02 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club!!
Nice portrait! The first thing I notice is the angle, it portrays such a feeling of fun, as does the expression on her face. Her eyes are beautiful, and maybe could have been accentuated more. With her blonde hair and fair skin, perhaps a darker color blouse or background might make this portrait a little more interesting and add a little more depth. The focus seems a bit off, her right eye seems sharper and brighter than the left. Very well composed, everything seems to work together to give the viewer a sense of fun. Overall, a great portrait of a pretty, happy girl! Good work and keep shooting!!
~~SiSi
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
09/15/2005 08:11:58 AM
too soft
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09/14/2005 05:39:02 AM
This is a cute girl with a cute pose. Would like to have seen a bit more light in her left eye. Maybe slightly out of focus.
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09/13/2005 11:01:34 PM
Good angle, it almost looks like a tear in her eye.
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09/13/2005 02:58:19 PM
Perhaps a little brighter colored blouse?
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09/13/2005 02:24:43 PM
Nice shot. Great pose too, I just wish there was more light around her mouth, the darkness being in that spot kind of distracts. 7
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09/13/2005 12:46:36 PM
great subject, just needs work on lighting and sharpness some
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09/13/2005 06:24:26 AM
A genuine smile and a familiar face, beautiful..
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09/12/2005 09:07:40 PM
A nice, natural model - pretty smile, and I like the contrasting thin, black border.
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09/12/2005 06:40:52 PM
Falleg stelpa og flott mynd. Finnst samt seinni vinnslan betri.
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09/12/2005 02:33:31 PM
Beautiful!!!! Perfect composition, and what a natural she is in front of the camera! There's such freshness and innocence in that face!
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09/12/2005 11:35:13 AM
Good composition. Natural expression. Had you use some fill light to tame down the shadows on her face (mostly the nose), you would have had a much better result.
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09/12/2005 10:54:20 AM
This is nice but I would call this a candid rather than a portrait. The shadows on the mouth and nose is a bit distracting. She has a beautiful smile and eyes!
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09/12/2005 10:54:09 AM
Love the eyes, expression and hair. Good Picture. The Blue sky in the back compliment her eyes well.
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