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09/23/2005 06:34:38 PM |
Greetings from the critique club Joyce!
Very interesting photo, I like the technique and the idea. Unfortunately the result wasn’t attractive enough or exciting enough to get the wow votes. I think the subject and the technique are good, but a flaw in your plan is the in focus part on the bottom of the image. It draws my attention to a place in the photo that I shouldn’t be paying attention to.
Suggestions: Get a little closer to the glasses with the camera to put more of the image in focus (through the glasses), but pull the glasses away from the board a little more (to eliminate the in focus part outside of the glasses). Maybe compose it so just one lens is visible and it coves about half the image, with the rest of the image out of focus?
I hope to see more photos from you as it looks like you have a interesting/creative mind. I hope you find this helpful, feel free to PM me if you have any questions of my review.
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09/20/2005 11:20:39 PM |
| nice perspective and cool idea nice lighting |
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09/20/2005 06:53:37 PM |
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09/20/2005 12:05:27 PM |
| Very well composed! This is definately one of my favorite photos here, though I feel it would have been even better with just a bit deeper depth of field. |
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09/15/2005 10:49:26 PM |
| Excellent focus on the..is that a checker of sorts? I love the crisp detail of it. |
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09/15/2005 02:13:07 PM |
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09/15/2005 06:28:29 AM |
| I like the idea, good job |
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09/15/2005 02:40:38 AM |
| Hmm interesting capture, I wish it hhad more direct relation to perspective as it could score very high |
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09/14/2005 08:43:06 PM |
| Clever idea, the perspective is good. |
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09/14/2005 07:03:05 PM |
| very creative! i would have chosen a different floor though - i don't like the tiles (or whatever it is) so much; good pic. |
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