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09/27/2005 01:50:00 PM |
**Critique Club**
Initial Impression: An good shot, but something seems a little off.
Detailed analysis: I love the colors of this shot, but there is something about it that I can't quite put my finger on. I think the perspective seems a bit offish. It could be the irregularity of the chairs. I think maybe cropping out the nearest section of chairs could help. The seatbacks of the section your model is sitting in break up the image too much IMHO. I also can't help but wonder what it would look like with more "red" in front of the model and less behind her. I would also like to see versions taken from the side and from in front from a low perspective to include a lot of the red (as you have done from behind).
Overall Impression: Pretty good shot but the blurry chairs in the foreground are a bit distracting. With a slightly different perspective and/or cropping could grab a ribbon. |
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09/21/2005 05:15:15 PM |
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09/20/2005 03:51:30 AM |
| this is cool. but blurry in this front part and personaly i find it distracting |
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09/19/2005 08:02:15 PM |
| This says to me that you are very creative person. I like this a lot!!! |
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09/19/2005 07:36:10 PM |
| neat sot- nice idea. Creative. |
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09/19/2005 03:40:49 PM |
| interesting and different, good job |
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09/18/2005 10:51:38 AM |
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09/16/2005 08:36:57 PM |
| Original. Cool. PRob would have cut out that first row of chairs on the bottom. Good luck |
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09/15/2005 05:09:42 PM |
| Very good! Maybe an even lower point of view would be even better |
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09/14/2005 01:18:26 PM |
| Very nice shot! Love the red and the composition of this photo. |
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