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10/02/2005 02:51:09 PM |
Critique Club Comment
COMPOSITION
I like the ring of blue and the haze around the blue light. The haze seems to lead my eyes around the light nicely and without it I am sure that it would not have had nearly the same effect.
I also like the fact that the ring is in the center of the photo as I think to have put it to one side may have taken away from the effect.
BACKGROUND
IMO I really like the way that this photo almost seems to fade into the black background.
CAMERA WORK
I think the focus is almost perfect for this photo. The only thing I wish wasn't so clear was the highlights on the circle itself. IMO they seem a little bright to me.
MY OPINION
I think that this is an interesting photo but I must say that it is not something that I would like to look at for hours on end.
As for meeting the challenge (which is a big part of what this site is all about) IMO I don't really think of a destination when I look at this image. Your title helped a lot but I still don't think it quite got it there.
Otherwise, well done! |
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09/25/2005 08:55:52 AM |
| Interesting interpretation. Like the colors and the fade to black. |
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09/25/2005 01:54:10 AM |
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09/22/2005 10:05:18 PM |
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09/21/2005 05:31:01 PM |
| This doesn't look like much of a destination to me. I get your title, I just don't think your image portrays it like I would imagine in my own head. I think it is the ring of light in the dead center that ruins it for me. |
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09/20/2005 11:38:22 PM |
| This is a beautiful abstract image. It seems a little difficult to tie it to the idea of a destinations, but I like it very much. |
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09/20/2005 11:25:50 PM |
| I really like the lighting. My eyes keep "diving" through the center in the hopes of seeing what there is. :-) |
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09/20/2005 09:01:13 AM |
| Destination? Yes. Color well done? Yes. Composition? Well, honestly, its a little boring. As a conceptual piece it works, much like modern art, but as a photograph it doesn't hold my attention for long. I really like the lighting effect you acheived. Also enjoy the fade to black. 7 - good luck in the challenge. |
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09/19/2005 11:11:08 PM |
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09/19/2005 11:16:17 AM |
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09/19/2005 10:21:04 AM |
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