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09/27/2005 05:19:41 PM |
| nice pic but it seems soft on the focus and i can't see many clear bubbles |
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09/26/2005 06:21:28 PM |
| This is a really neat photo. Good Job. |
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09/25/2005 08:19:09 PM |
| With a bit faster shutter speed this would have been a very cool shot. I like your concept - shows creativity. |
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09/23/2005 09:27:19 PM |
| Great idea and comp but much too blurry and too much noise. |
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09/22/2005 07:59:08 PM |
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09/22/2005 11:48:32 AM |
| I think this it too dark and out of focus... |
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09/21/2005 07:49:32 PM |
| The image definitely fits the challenge as there are bubbles to be seen, however the technical merits are a bit soft. The lighting is pretty good, I like the different levels of lighting and how it seems to bounce off of the one shell onto the other, I love seeing how light plays in and on water so this is a good tool to help highlight other areas of the image. That said, the light on the open shell is a bit harsh and you lose some detail there. The composition is alright, it looks as though you dropped the shells in the water? This gives a feeling of floating and movement which adds interest to an image. The focus is the biggest issue I think. The soft focus makes us lose quite a bit of detail with the bubbles, which should be a fairly important piece of this image due to the challenge. It also would increase the interest and impact of the photo if the shells had more definition. The color is a bit bland, however I do think were other aspects improved the cool color it has would work to the advantage. I think crisp focus and a slightly different use of light - taking advantage of how it works through water would have given this photograph a much better impact. I gave a 3 as it isn't horrible, there are some good portions to it and there is much to work with, but the overall presentation didn't move me at all. |
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09/21/2005 04:37:15 PM |
Please don't be offended by this comment. I am making an effort to comment on all images that I scored below a 4. Although your image meets the challenge requirements, I believe attention to the following might have served to make it work better for me (Mind you, this is only MY opinion):
Composition is not bad, but it is out of focus and the bluish tint does not appeal to me. I do like the idea of bubbles created by dropping objects in water, though. |
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09/21/2005 10:01:16 AM |
| Nice idae and obviously a tought shot - I think something should have been in focus? |
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09/21/2005 05:54:12 AM |
| good try ... nice picture. |
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