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06/15/2003 06:47:26 PM |
Critique Club
Very nice represntation of sound. It could have been improved more had someone been playing it.
Over all the focus and dof are good on this only thing that is slightly off is your lighting it just gets to dark on the right side. Also had you been able to cut back the lighting glare on the harmonica itself it would have helped.
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06/08/2003 10:52:10 PM |
| Nice shot. Whites are a bit blown out in the lower left corner, but this doesn't bother me much. Good shot. |
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06/06/2003 06:28:23 PM |
| I wish the foreground part of the harmonica was in focus, but I like the composition and choice of BW. :) |
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06/04/2003 03:07:44 PM |
| The bw works well, but I think it may have been more effective if you could have had a wider depth of field. |
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06/02/2003 05:04:33 PM |
| Some washed out spots, but good texture overall. |
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06/02/2003 04:20:07 PM |
| It took me quite some time to realize this was a harmonica, and I'm still not sure I'm right. Maybe it's the angle, maybe the lighting, maybe a bit of both. It being unclear to me de-emphasized the impact of topic. |
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06/02/2003 03:00:29 PM |
| Image looks oddly warped and as with some other submissions I feel there is no sound here, only the potential for sound. |
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06/02/2003 04:16:10 AM |
| my eye seems be drawn away from the sound of this to the bottom right due to the shine, maybe shooting this slightly lower to get more of the mouth piece in and less shine would have got you an 8 off me but due to the shine 6 - 7 |
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06/02/2003 12:21:22 AM |
| I got one of these too, it was my Grandfathers, why didn't I think of it...lol Good representation of sound. |
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