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06/11/2003 07:33:48 PM |
*Critique Club*
This definately meet the challenge as it portrays "White Noise" beyond fitting the challenge there isn't a lot to say about it. I tend to agree with the comments left behind it is just to dark and not all that interesting.
You would have improved greating if the lighting was a little strong and crop in more on just the picture from the tv.
I did read your comment and I know the feeling too it just sucks to not have a submission! You did a pretty good critique of it too. Nice try on a last minute attempt and as someone said in the comments...nice experiment. I agree cause it could work if it weren't so dark.
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06/06/2003 10:42:17 AM |
| While this picture does bring, at least to this third shifter, the feeling of sound, I donĂ¢€™t really find it appealing. Sorry just my opinion. I gave it a 4 |
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06/04/2003 09:11:01 PM |
| This picture gives me a sense of stressed emotion.... knowing the sound of that "stand by" noise when I don't wish to hear it. |
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06/04/2003 03:08:51 PM |
| It definitely meets the challenge, but there is little there to hold my attention. I do like how the blue jumps out from the rest of the picture. |
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06/02/2003 11:59:15 PM |
| Wow, I can hear that. Shisssssssssssssishhhhsiiisshhh. |
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06/02/2003 06:39:58 PM |
whissssSSSSSSsssssSSSSSSSssssssSSSSS
Okay! Yes, this definitely meets the challenge. The clutter on the left is a little distracting, as is the doorway. The TV actually having a visible antenna is good emphasis the subject, although, heh, you may not have had a choice there (I used to think I was the last person in the wired world without cable, but maybe I was mistaken). (Also, I have it now.) (Well, directTV, and it's not like you care about this at all, but I got 2 hours of sleep, which tends to make for the occasional bizarre comments.)
Anyhow. Cropped to get rid of the left clutter would lose you part of the antenna, so I suppose I'd recommend a slightly different angle for a bit more impact, but overall I like the idea. |
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06/02/2003 02:57:58 PM |
| Very dark image with not much of interest to view. Fits the challenge well, though. |
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06/02/2003 02:11:34 PM |
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06/02/2003 01:17:49 PM |
| Oh i hate this sound :P I can feel the sound here but the photo is too dark, and honestly not much to grab interest. |
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06/02/2003 12:34:24 PM |
| Really, really clever. Strange that this pictures evokes 'sound' better than almost any other submission. |
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06/02/2003 02:49:52 AM |
| i hate white noise. interesting idea, but could have been done in a more interesting way i think. |
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