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10/06/2005 03:32:58 PM |
Originally posted by cpanaioti: Compositionally I think you've done well, lining the drum and tree up on the diagonal to add depth. However, the horizon is slightly tilted to the left and the angle of the beach is a bit distracting. Maybe cropped a little too tight on top.
Just an opinion though.
Keep shooting. |
the horizon is ok, the edge of the beach is probably what you see as the horrizon
villy |
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10/05/2005 08:23:05 PM |
Compositionally I think you've done well, lining the drum and tree up on the diagonal to add depth. However, the horizon is slightly tilted to the left and the angle of the beach is a bit distracting. Maybe cropped a little too tight on top.
Just an opinion though.
Keep shooting. |
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10/05/2005 06:37:37 PM |
I gave this a six. Technically it was a fine shot but the subject wasn't particularly interesting and while it was an adequate interpretation of the challenge it didn't wow me. Hope this helps.
A 5 on my scale is "meets expectations." A 6 is beats expectations. A 7 or higher does at least one thing exceptionally well. A 10 does multiple things exceptionally well. |
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10/05/2005 06:34:44 PM |
I think the score is about right. A little more cropping, esp. on the right side and more contrast. I think it might have done a little better. That's just me though. How would it look in black and white? |
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10/05/2005 10:22:25 AM |
technically good, rules of thirds, sharp focus and all, but alas, doesnt hold much interest. maybe that's why it didnt get the score you hoped for? |
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10/05/2005 04:14:14 AM |
This is superb. It forces me to look at it longer naed longer. Rule of thirds is excellent applied. 2 bad it ended up at 5.041. This one deserves 6.041 at least. |
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10/01/2005 11:45:06 PM |
This is terrific! Arresting composition, and a great idea to juxtapose the tree with the grungy old plastic drum ... the image demands the viewer's attention. I like photographs that use just a few elements for maximum visual and intellectual impact, and this is one of those! |
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09/29/2005 11:20:08 PM |
excellent shot. i really the perspective and textures of the beach. |
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