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10/24/2005 07:29:50 PM |
| This park looks familiar..nice job with the photo! I really like the composition and the perspective on the shot. The balance between areas is nice as well. Well done! |
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10/02/2005 03:48:08 PM |
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10/01/2005 01:01:04 PM |
| Beautiful sceen. The could be improved if the white structure was less centered IMO |
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09/30/2005 11:39:44 AM |
| Not sure how this conveys "Thinking of you". The gazebo is too centered and the foreground water seems too algae infested. Maybe cropping out more of the water would help as well as some of the left side to draw more attention to the gazebo, bench, and sky. |
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09/29/2005 09:46:31 PM |
| A black border makes me think death. the green surface makes me think yuck. the rest is ok |
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09/29/2005 09:34:44 PM |
| A very nice shot. The "lonely" gazebo makes for a nice subject for the card. Only (minor) criticism might be that green water + "thinking of you" may not be the desired message. |
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09/28/2005 10:54:12 AM |
| Nice picture. I like the white pilars against the green background and the tree line to the sky. The shore on the bottom is distracting though. Maybe crop that out. Like the framing. |
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09/27/2005 11:59:54 AM |
| I like this a lot. I love how it almost looks like different horizontal layers. The only thing I would have done differently is not put the gazebo in the center. |
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09/27/2005 10:17:04 AM |
| Very pretty!! I think I'd crop to move the gazebo so it's not so centered. The reflection is lovely. The greens are beautiful and soothing. I might do a slight straighten too. It's barely unparallel with the bottom line of the shot. |
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09/26/2005 11:22:47 AM |
| I think I recognize this gazebo and the processing as being a deapee shot but I could be wrong ;) I like the location a lot, but I'm not too sure about the centered composition for this one. I also think the water and shoreline are a bit icky, especially for a "thinking of you" card. I might suggest a crop on the bottom to get rid of the shoreline, and possibly up into the water past the first dark green patch. I think there are lots of opportunities for shots at this location, perhaps with more perspective and depth rather than more of a flat-on approach. I do like the processing and the colors. :) |
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09/26/2005 02:54:00 AM |
| A very lovely shot - great colors and tones! The water looks a little murky / dirty, which gives "Thinking of You" a whole new meaning. LOL Good luck. |
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09/26/2005 12:34:53 AM |
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