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Hot Summer Day
Hot Summer Day
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Challenge: Beverages (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Quantaray AF 70-300mm f/4.0-5.6 High-Speed for Nikon
Location: Tennessee
Date: Sep 25, 2005
Aperture: 4.5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/500
Galleries: Black and White, Water
Date Uploaded: Sep 25, 2005

Shot in RAW format
PS for cropping, desaturation

Statistics
Place: 25 out of 206
Avg (all users): 5.9542
Avg (commenters): 9.3333
Avg (participants): 5.7500
Avg (non-participants): 6.0575
Views since voting: 1279
Views during voting: 382
Votes: 262
Comments: 9
Favorites: 0


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10/11/2005 11:36:14 PM
Salut from the critique club!

I love the energy of this picture. You immediately get the feel of a classic hot summer day, kids playing with the hose...

There isn't a lot for me to say, really.

Technically, it's excellent (not that I'm an expert on technical aptitude). It's compositionally excellent, and with your fast shutter, you got an excellent capture, where you can really see the drops off water.

I would say this is a little bit on the dark side. A slight boost in contrast or brightness would give the picture just a bit more lightness that would I think, improve the little things in the picture.

One things is his eyes, especially his right eye, is in the shadows. I'm not sure if the sun was off to the side, but in a picture like this, a little bit more light on the eyes so you could really see his expression in his eyes would be neat.

I've noticed both your entries so far have been black and white. Both your pictures entered so far are excellent. I don't know if you prefer black and white or not, but if you don't have a preference, try some color ones. This particular picture may have a different dynamic in color than in b&w

If you have any questions or anything, feel free to pm me. I'm no expert on photography, but I'm jsut trying to chip in here and there.

Happy shooting and I look forward to your future submissions!
Cheers
pidge
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10/07/2005 12:16:32 PM
kewl shot!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/04/2005 11:44:55 PM
Cute and good stop motion
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10/04/2005 12:42:38 PM
Great job on this photo. This was one of my favorites in this challenge. I gave it a ten.
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10/03/2005 11:08:36 PM
nicely done...8
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10/01/2005 07:20:07 PM
This should be in a window at a Hallmark store (that's not a bad thing).
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09/30/2005 01:51:32 PM
awwww
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09/29/2005 08:14:14 PM
excellent motion capture!
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09/29/2005 07:39:08 PM
very different..I like it..!!
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