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06/16/2003 02:47:39 PM |
Greetings from the CC!
COLOR & FOCUS: The fluorenscent blue works very well with the black bg. Good choice! I don't see any probs with your focus.
LIGHTING: nothing to say. For this kind of shot I think you acheived what you wanted to acheived lighting wise. I wouldn't change a thing. :)
COMPOSITION: ok.... good job on centering the glass.
No I'm not sure whetherthe blue on the left side of the glass is a reflection or liquid. It looks more like liquid to me. Whatever it s it's very distracting and breaks the "evenness" of the centered subject. There are lso some black spots on the ice in the middle of the glass. It looks like dust or something. It also revoves from the perfection of the shot. And what's this!! The left border is thiker than the other side?? OOPS!! :) Gotta watch out for that! ;-)
All in all a good shot. I gave you 7 cuz of the originality and nice colors. The biggest challenge is getting the WOW! factor in and that'll bring your photo in the 6s or higher!! There's no secret recipe for that cuz I'm pretty inconsistant myself! :)
Hitting a 5.2 on a 1st submission is good! Keep it up!
Yanik |
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06/10/2003 12:02:22 PM |
Very nice shot. I really like the blue color! Nice work 9/10 |
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06/08/2003 12:52:51 PM |
One wild looking liquid! I like the glow. Strange refelctions off to the left. I'm not sure how you did this so I can't begin to suggest what to do about them, but ot would look better if the glass were against an entirely black background. Maybe compose on a glass surface with the light below? |
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06/08/2003 04:30:08 AM |
Inasmuch as I like the lighting and the glowy effect, I'm not convinced this is not water. |
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06/06/2003 11:19:28 AM |
I like the effect you've gotten here and would like to know if it was lit from below. |
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06/05/2003 02:22:52 PM |
Is it REAL liquid ecstacy?! |
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06/04/2003 09:31:05 AM |
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06/04/2003 08:16:46 AM |
fantastic shot. However your border is a little uneven. I find if you increase canvas size by an odd amount, that tends to happen. Like if you increase by 5 pixles, 3 pixles go on one side and only 2 on the other. terrific shot though |
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