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06/15/2003 10:37:58 PM |
| The slight tilt of the keyboard reallly helps add interest to this image. It seems slightly out of focus, though, and I think some more interesting lighting would add more drama and mood to the image, which would lead my thoughts beyond the photo, as it were, to think about deeper or broader things. |
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06/14/2003 06:41:27 AM |
| Yes, that's your keyboard! I like it! .. I think this photo would have worked better if you used external lighting.. like a lamp? instead of the flash (the flash tends to bounce light off things like chrome). I also think it would have worked better if you had rotated the picture a bit, to get rid of the desk in the top left corner. Technically, keyboards don't really make fascinating subjects :) good try though! |
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06/12/2003 09:32:46 PM |
| I'm looking at one of these right now. So I'm thinking I don't need a picture of it too. The keyboard is enough. This is awful bright too... |
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06/11/2003 10:03:41 PM |
| Should have made it level and cut out the top left corner - the desk part. Also - why cut off certain keys? Is your keyboard inherently more interesting than the one any of us are at? |
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06/11/2003 01:42:35 AM |
| I suppose ARTart is in there somewhere. |
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06/10/2003 09:13:01 AM |
| In all honesty, it just doesn't look like much thought was put into this. Sorry to sound harsh... but it's "just a picture of a keyboard." The counterclockwise tilt feels uncomfortable, and the apparent use of flash created over-lit spots in the center of the shot. Again, I hate being harsh in comments, but if I score something low, I generally try to provide an explanation as to why... - 2 |
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06/09/2003 07:02:38 PM |
| blurred and overexposed. the angling is distracting. |
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06/09/2003 01:21:04 PM |
| A little uninteresting to me... perhaps if you'd rotated so either the keys were in a straight line, or gone the opposite way so it was an extreme slant. Also, macro shot could look good here. |
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06/09/2003 12:02:24 PM |
| perhaps you should have straightened this up a little bit. It also seems to lack a focal point. Good luck, Todd. |
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