| Author | Thread |
|
|
11/03/2005 11:47:23 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Nice take on the challenge, but it has it flaws. I'm going to start by saying the PANELING...that line on the wall just distracts from your models beauty, it tends to pull the eye from her to it.
As for the pose and one boot just isn't eye pleasing. A different pose such as both hands on the wall feet apart as if being frisked by police or a different shoe might have solved the awkwardness here im seeing.
Your lighting seems to be good as does your focus. Its the silly things you overlook that hurt you during a challenge.
Anna |
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
10/30/2005 09:35:20 PM |
| This image has that old tinplate look. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
10/25/2005 01:55:59 PM |
| Voyeuristic use of grain so well done. Like the muted tones too. Cropping of hand looks awkward but this is nice. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
10/25/2005 02:07:14 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
10/24/2005 03:09:39 AM |
| Sorry but I just can't see what the grain adds here. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
10/24/2005 12:28:55 AM |
| This doesn't have much to offer without the grain, so unfortunately, the noise doesn't add to it. The pose is awkward and the single boot seems odd to me. A nude standing by a window with sepia might've worked better. (sigh) |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/18/2025 12:06:23 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
