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Against the Wall
Against the Wall
lizzyc3


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Challenge: Image Grain (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Sony DSC-P72
Location: Salem, OR
Date: Oct 19, 2005
Date Uploaded: Oct 19, 2005

Yeah its me again. I predict 5.3 'cause so much is cut of. I just wanna get a higher rating but its ok, I'm trying :)

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11/03/2005 11:47:23 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club

Nice take on the challenge, but it has it flaws. I'm going to start by saying the PANELING...that line on the wall just distracts from your models beauty, it tends to pull the eye from her to it.

As for the pose and one boot just isn't eye pleasing. A different pose such as both hands on the wall feet apart as if being frisked by police or a different shoe might have solved the awkwardness here im seeing.

Your lighting seems to be good as does your focus. Its the silly things you overlook that hurt you during a challenge.

Anna
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/30/2005 09:35:20 PM
This image has that old tinplate look.
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10/25/2005 01:55:59 PM
Voyeuristic use of grain so well done. Like the muted tones too. Cropping of hand looks awkward but this is nice.
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10/25/2005 02:07:14 AM
dirtyyyyyyyyy ;o)
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10/24/2005 03:09:39 AM
Sorry but I just can't see what the grain adds here.
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10/24/2005 12:28:55 AM
This doesn't have much to offer without the grain, so unfortunately, the noise doesn't add to it. The pose is awkward and the single boot seems odd to me. A nude standing by a window with sepia might've worked better. (sigh)
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