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07/01/2003 11:38:31 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
I like the simplicity of your composition and technique here. The eyes are immediately drawn to you, then out your arm following to where you are pointing to. Also the colors are simple but effective. (A red shirt would have really made for some nice contrast, I think).
I don't know what any of your settings were, but overall the focus looks just a touch off. To really make this shot stand out from the rest, I think the focus needed to be right on. The lighting is good, and the rest works, but it doesn't seem to be as well focused as it could be.
Good work and best to you in future challenges.
karmat
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06/23/2003 11:54:55 AM |
| I like the feeling you've gotten here of a big blue expansive sky contrasting with the green rolling hills. Also, very good DOF. I do wish there was more of you to be seen in the photo, though. Well done overall. |
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06/21/2003 10:19:44 PM |
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06/21/2003 07:35:02 PM |
| I like the fairytale feel of this. Very happy, which is a nice change from most of the somber self-portraits. :) |
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06/21/2003 07:13:05 PM |
| Really like the space created by this shot. Says something about you too. |
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06/20/2003 08:28:46 PM |
Nice Picture - you fuck!!! How did you set the camera up like this? You sure it wasn't some dope-ass professional camera man who shot this?
- j
p.s. you best believe I'm giving this picture a 10. |
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06/20/2003 12:29:52 PM |
| Whoa!!! Is that where the Teletubbies live?! What a glorious space. You look so sage, pointing off into the clouds. I love it. |
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06/20/2003 01:30:49 AM |
| So what are you pointing at? The clouds? |
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06/19/2003 07:29:13 PM |
| The background and foreground, despite the pointing finger, just don't seem to connect to each other very well. I feel kinda like I'm looking at the windows xp wallpaper with someone tacked onto the side of it. |
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06/19/2003 02:37:45 PM |
| nice concept, nice idea...i like the clouds...congrats |
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06/19/2003 07:33:04 AM |
| nice idea, but not a self-portrait in my opinion. Not that my opinion would matter ;) |
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06/19/2003 03:11:42 AM |
| neat shot, it really caught my eye as I was flipping through the thumbnails. You sure were given a perfect day for this one. |
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06/19/2003 01:30:11 AM |
| Wow, beautiful landscape. Very cool composition. |
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06/19/2003 12:17:28 AM |
hey its the windows xp background
lol |
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06/18/2003 12:30:10 PM |
| nice shoot.. you should enhance the definition / detail |
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06/18/2003 11:30:41 AM |
| Nice shot.... What are you pointing at? A cloud shaped like something? Great landscape there. |
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06/18/2003 01:51:55 AM |
| looks like you painted the skies. great idea there. resembles windowsXP's Bliss wallpaper, nice! 8 |
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06/18/2003 12:34:31 AM |
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