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11/04/2005 12:10:17 AM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
Good use of grain it reminds me of an old magazine ad from the 70s. So of course it fits the challenge well.
Your lighting seems to harsh causing much of the flowers and background to be overly exposed. A litle less backlight might have solved all the lighting issues.
As for your composition I like it has an air of freshness about it in this challenge.
Anna |
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10/25/2005 12:11:03 AM |
| Nice composition on this shot and beautiful flowers! I think that a little bit of levels adjustment might bring out some of the shadows and lights/darks in this photo. |
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10/24/2005 05:11:27 PM |
| I would like this better if the left half was not overexposed. |
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10/24/2005 08:38:08 AM |
| I like the idea of this but it's a bit too busy for my taste. It is way over exposed too, so the flowers are almost "hot" and the figure is too blanched out. Maybe an adjustment of curves would help. Also, utilize the 640 pixelation, so that you can maximize the size of the shot. |
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