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Molly Noyes - vintage
Molly Noyes - vintage
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Image Grain (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 80-200mm f/2.8D ED
Location: Monterey Bay, CA (dorm room)
Date: Oct 23, 2005
Aperture: F4
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/60th
Galleries: Portraiture, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Oct 23, 2005

This is my girlfriend Molly! I've submitted her to other challenges....feel free to check my profile for more!

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11/03/2005 04:12:17 PM
Chris,

Beautiful photograph of a beautiful (and very natural) model. I think the lighting is good, the detail is adequate, and her hair is great. I agree with the other commenter, however, that perhaps the cropping is the least interesting part of this picture. If you turned the cropping horizontally, it wouldn't seem so claustrophobic. There is something about the cropping in addition to her head tilt that make it seem like she's in a box. :)

The only other thing I would do is bump the contrast, only because there should be a better balance of darks and lights in a portrait, and this is more and the dark side that anything.

Kudos though, I still really like this.

-- Critique Club
 Comments Made During the Challenge
10/30/2005 03:59:50 PM
nice lines and softness
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10/29/2005 01:31:23 PM
The nostalgic feel is achieved here. I'm glad you weren't scared of using grain. 8
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10/28/2005 10:05:43 AM
What a wonderful composition. I love the vintage feel to this. . .and she is such a beautiful model -- so comfortable looking in front of the camera.
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10/27/2005 01:43:26 AM
framing of the head is alittle odd, but i can live with it, the hair here is very pretty and i wish the it was a horz. orientation and the face was far left only half showing and the hair taking up the rest of the frame....inother words, great lighting and start but a different framing is required here...IMO, Good luck
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10/26/2005 10:33:59 AM
would have looked more natural if very high contrast
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