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Challenge: Image Grain (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Olympus E-20N
Location: Bethany Ontario
Date: Oct 23, 2005
Aperture: 5.6
ISO: 320
Shutter: 200
Date Uploaded: Oct 23, 2005

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11/03/2005 03:42:40 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club

You certainly chose a fine subject for this Challenge. It works well in monochromatic mode too.

I have a couple of thoughts for you. First. The structure (Silo?) is almost there. I'd like to see the top of it as well. A viewer tends to want to complete the image, and in this case, is stopped a bit short.

Then, it would be good to see something that was a bit more in focus. Either a part of the structure or a tree. Just something to give a viewer something to hang on to.

Finally, an old favorite in our Camera Club, Border Patrol. Perhaps by moving a bit to the left, that partial tree to the right side of your image would be eliminated. (Now, if you moved over there and there was a big pit or something, you can tell me to go jump in it, instead...)

Seriously, you have a good image here that fits the Challenge. It wouldn't take much tweaking to make it really good.

Keep up the good work.
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10/30/2005 08:15:00 PM
i really like this one. it gives me a spooky feeling.
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10/24/2005 12:25:04 PM
The structure seems truncated - I look for a bit, not much, of space both at the bottom and top of the structure. As it is shown it seems squeezed into the image.


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