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11/05/2005 10:10:51 PM |
Greetings from the critique club
You have a very nice composition here she is fairly well in focus your background is slightly blurred to keep from distracting. Overall its a nice family portrait.
Do I see delicate no not at all what I see is a very pretty girl in a somewhat shy pose but I have no reason to think delicate.
Your lighting is a little harsh as her nose is getting lost in the light.
Again you have a nice portrait you just didn't convey delicate all that well.
Anna |
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10/29/2005 09:02:24 PM |
| the outfit demonstrates to me more power than delicate. It is almost a power coat for a woman to wear. the color is a little washed. |
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10/28/2005 03:38:44 PM |
| Nice shot but the focus point seems to be on the buttons of her jacket rather than on her face and eyes. |
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10/26/2005 10:03:15 PM |
| an attractrive woman, nice use of 3rd rule, but wouldn't it be nice if she were doing something "delicate" like smelling a flower, holding a baby, or a kitten, etc. |
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10/26/2005 10:08:14 AM |
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10/26/2005 12:42:37 AM |
| I like the crop and the model ain't bad either ;) |
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