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11/04/2005 09:07:30 PM |
Greetings from the Critique CLub
I'm going to start out by saying WHY WHY WHY that black border the image stood well on its own but that border seems to say hey look out here on the edges where there is nothing...definately it was a big distraction.
Next there does seem to be a bit of noise in the background.
Also you seem slightly overexposed on part of the flower. just a tad to much lighting.
Now that I'm done complaining what I do like about the photo is the simplicity of it the colors and the way the flower stands out. It is does meet the challenge well as being delicate.
Anna |
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11/01/2005 11:26:42 AM |
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10/29/2005 01:00:42 AM |
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10/28/2005 11:55:01 PM |
| I really like this shot but the background is a little noisy |
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10/28/2005 08:31:30 PM |
| I generally like simple compositions such as yours, but for me there is just a bit too much white space here. Also, I find the choice of black for the border a bit overwhelming and takes away from the photo's softness for me. I wonder how the border would look if you chose the purple color from the flower? |
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10/27/2005 01:51:48 PM |
| Very nice picture. Wish I could see a tad more detail in the flower (in the rear) against the background, but still a top 10 picture in my opinion. |
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10/27/2005 09:20:50 AM |
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10/26/2005 03:31:53 PM |
| Very pretty!! Beautiful color, nice composition, great exposure. 9 |
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10/26/2005 10:14:20 AM |
| Pretty. The first thing that hurts you is the dark frame. I'd have used one of the colors of the flower - perhaps the palest - yellow or lilac maybe. Love the use of negative space. |
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10/26/2005 07:47:11 AM |
| delicate, well composed, and very good technique. |
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10/26/2005 01:20:00 AM |
| Meets the challenge, just not very interesting. |
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