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I can almost see it!
I can almost see it!
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Transparency II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Sony Mavica CD500
Location: studio
Date: Oct 27, 2005
Aperture: F/4
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/100
Galleries: Abstract, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Oct 25, 2005

Set up:
standing next to sliding glass door, holding a piece of glass in front of me, camera on tripod and timer behind me. no other lighting besides natural lighting from window.

Post Processing;
Cloned out some highlights and reflection of a finger, a light switch adj sat just a bit, added a custom filter to add the grain, added a blue adj layer, and cropped.

Statistics
Place: 54 out of 155
Avg (all users): 5.6548
Avg (commenters): 6.7692
Avg (participants): 5.2346
Avg (non-participants): 5.9483
Views since voting: 1168
Views during voting: 329
Votes: 197
Comments: 14
Favorites: 2 (view)


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11/09/2005 09:09:14 PM
*Critique Club*

What an interesting idea, great concept under the transparency category. I like that you were brave and put yourself out there, I think that is awesome. The subject is great, I love the combining of two subject like a woman and science. The first thing that hits me from the image is your shirt. The texture draws away from the subject just a little bit, I would have preferred a basic t-shirt either white or black. Also there seems to be a little bit of a line above your head on the left side, some one commented on possible window sill in the shot. I really love the warming feeling in the background color, it almost looks like a perfect backdrop. I think you did a great job I would have scored you higher then what you received. Good job.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/06/2005 11:43:28 PM
Returning for comments:
This has that mural feel. An outstanding study. Returning for a bump.
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11/06/2005 09:46:55 PM
My fave of the challenge
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11/04/2005 07:07:07 PM
I would like it more with harder contrast +30 in PS.
I know that that would blow out some highlights but under the advanced editing rules you are allowe to correct for that with the history brush.
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11/02/2005 08:02:16 PM
Yay, a true transparency sub mission, well done
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11/02/2005 07:44:40 PM
Your photo gives me a 1970's kind of feel. A shot that would have been in an Astronomy magazine. Good transparency, and creative.
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11/02/2005 02:33:52 PM
This is quite a striking image, although I feel that it could do with a bit more contrast. Also, there seems to be quite a lot of haloing around the underside of the telescope.
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10/31/2005 10:02:53 PM
Well, I'm not too sure I like the composition. The subject has too little interaction with the telescope. Why are the two in the same picture? and why is she transparent? the technicals are nice though.
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10/31/2005 07:51:38 PM
this strikes me more as a reflection image than a transparent image...
i love the look of strength on your model's face.
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10/31/2005 04:45:48 PM
I would have cropped the photo more on the right... But great photo!
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10/31/2005 02:45:28 PM
Wow, is that real. The woman almost looks like a painting. Cool.
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10/31/2005 08:58:14 AM
I like this shot very much. Although I am wondering what is that in the top left cornor of the frame.
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10/31/2005 01:12:17 AM
great image! only thing I would change is clone out the lines in the top left (windowsill?)
very nice tho- 7
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10/31/2005 01:12:07 AM
this is a reflection isnt it? I'm easily confused ;) I like the look on her face though.. the emotion is transparent to me :)
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