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11/07/2005 07:00:45 PM |
*Greetings from Critique Club*
First, let me say that I think the image is very appealing visually and has a lot to offer the viewer from an abstract perspective. Second, I think your score probably suffered quite a bit because people couldn't distinguish exactly what it was and therefore couldn't necessarily tie it into the transparency challenge theme. (Just my opinion and supposition.)
Composition
I really like the lines and fluidity of the image. The surfaces also seem to lend themselves to the abstract nature well. There do appear to be some issues with the left sides of the curved objects (PP remnants?) that are a little distracting, but not that noticeable. Very interesting and appealing...
Focus
I think that the focus, while good, could have been a tad sharper. To pull off this high-tech/industrial/sharp/clean artistic shot, I think the focus has gotta be dead on. There appears to be a little static noise in the image, still it's good.
Lighting
I think you're lighting is great. Obviously, lighting is a key element of your subject matter here and I think you pulled it off nicely. You've got great reflections, tonal ranges, and no real hot or overly blown out areas. I like the green coloration too.
Overall
I like it and think it is a much better shot than the score it received. Good stuff and I continue to look forward to more of your work. (You've got some great shots in your portfolio!)
Just my 2 cents... |
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11/06/2005 11:12:13 PM |
Returning for comments:
Looks like somrthing from a high tech meditaion room. the colors are intriguing and the shapes plays like magic. |
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11/03/2005 11:59:01 AM |
| creepy and surreal . . .I love it! |
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11/02/2005 09:38:12 PM |
| This is a great image. It has an abstract mystery that can hang as an artwork. |
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11/02/2005 12:42:43 PM |
| Interesting shot, framing -wise, although it just looks a little empty to me with nothing to really grab my attention. |
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11/02/2005 01:26:50 AM |
| Interesting in it's abstract nature. I'm not quite sure what I'm looking at. I don't really know about the green tone and I see some boo-boos from post processing. (left side of black shape and left side of base). 6 |
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10/31/2005 07:48:57 PM |
| great photo! love the choice of color and the focus effect. what's the object? it's quite cool, and really does make for a visually dynamic shot. very nicely done, and good luck! |
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10/31/2005 04:46:56 PM |
| i dont know exactly what it is, but i really like the lines.....and the color! great job! |
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10/31/2005 08:53:35 AM |
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10/31/2005 02:35:47 AM |
| interesting.. I like green too ;) |
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10/31/2005 12:53:48 AM |
| Looks fairly good but I'm not sure what it is |
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