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Challenge: Transparency II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Gateway DC-T50
Location: Studio/Office, Buchanan, VA
Date: Oct 30, 2005
Aperture: 1:2.8
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/6 sec
Galleries: Emotive, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Oct 30, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 140 out of 155
Avg (all users): 4.7411
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.3875
Avg (non-participants): 4.9829
Views since voting: 1044
Views during voting: 374
Votes: 197
Comments: 11
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02/16/2006 09:55:04 AM
haha, didnt know this was you!
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11/07/2005 07:28:21 PM
***Greeting from the Critique Club***

Lets start by looking at the whole picture...I love the black backgroung. I think it goes great with the cloth you have on. Looking at the eyes really draws me into the picture. In other words, they're at a good level!

This is the part I don't like doing...but the problem I see wrong with the picture is the hand is just in the way. Maybe if it was more like your Wraith picture it would have helped. I would have liked to seen more of the models face. Maybe the hand under the chin would have helped.

I hope my critique helps...
Phillip

Message edited by author 2006-11-02 17:28:51.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/04/2005 09:09:07 PM
I'll be honest. I'm kinda geting tired of seeing this same type of shot.
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11/04/2005 06:08:16 PM
interesting documentative gesture--good lighting and composition
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11/03/2005 10:38:03 AM
Kind of creepy, but its nice!
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11/02/2005 02:42:43 PM
I quite like this shot, but the moire pattern in the forehead region detracts somewhat. This could be corrected by a little blurring.
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11/02/2005 02:29:08 PM
i dont really like this picture...there isnt much of a focus
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11/01/2005 02:16:05 PM
Hmm, creative, but what is the photographic intent of the picture? I'm not sure. Political? Artistic? It's too bad the compression left that moire pattern on her forehead. 5
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10/31/2005 08:49:09 PM
A good idea, but your image is coming across as pixelated on my screen, whereas other entries in the challenge have not. I also wonder how this would look as a black and white photo with a bit more contrast?
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10/31/2005 07:52:50 PM
you know, i look at this photo and the eye is what pops out at me. the transparent fabric is what she happens to be wearing. a very cool shot.
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10/31/2005 05:13:42 PM
i liked it!
as i am a muslim, it meant what i feel ..
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