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07/15/2003 03:09:51 AM |
| text Keep up the good work. |
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06/28/2003 02:56:05 PM |
| Sigh - I was so off this week. All of my tens did poorly. Three finished on this page. Oh well, I still think this could have finished in first place. Absolutely perfect picture. |
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06/25/2003 01:46:01 PM |
Thank you all for the helpful comments. Special thanks to ClubJuggle for the in-depth critique.
I can't explain the reason for my facial expression, except to say that obviously I don't know how to model. ;-)
Thanks again, everyone! |
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06/25/2003 02:17:51 AM |
Hi Jennifer, great shot. I was one of the 4 people to give this a 10, and frankly, I am shocked and disappointed that it did not do better. Like others, I was not quite sure what to make of your facial experession... but the positive side of that is that it caused me to stop and pay attention, and think for a bit... but what I got out of it was someone who is balancing a career and a child... which after reading your profile turns out to be correct! Now, that can be stressful of course, and I think your expression reflects that. I like the toning of this shot, it's warm and fitting to the mood of the shot as a whole. The lightinw works for me, and though it wasn't a factor in my scoring, you make an attractive model as well.
In all I think this deserved much better than the 5.7 you finished with. Thanks for sharing, and good luck in future challenges! |
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06/24/2003 05:43:29 PM |
| Nice tone - expression looks nonplussed, though - what emotion were you rtying to convey? |
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06/21/2003 07:18:31 PM |
| Nice exposure, the frame works well. |
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06/21/2003 12:13:33 AM |
| Nicely shot and for some reason, I do really like the inner frame. Lighting may be a touch too harsh and overdone though |
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06/20/2003 11:25:57 PM |
| I really like the pose, and the black and white, but it is a little washed out for me. |
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06/20/2003 08:19:36 AM |
| Great light and soft focus. The atmosphere is excellent. I think just your expression is wrong. I think laughing would have suited the atmosphere better. Love the duotones too. 8 - floyd |
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06/20/2003 03:19:22 AM |
| Most of the time I don't like soft focus. However the way you have done it is fantastic! I also like the duotone and the border. Good job! (9) |
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06/19/2003 10:07:37 PM |
| I like the white on white. The expression is superb. The little line does nothing for me, but to each his/her own. |
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06/19/2003 02:55:15 PM |
| I really like the soft focus and high key photography here. They work well together with the title and the expression on this fabulously gorgeous model. |
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06/19/2003 01:24:57 AM |
| Nice portrait,I would like it sharper more 9 from me! |
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06/18/2003 10:41:32 PM |
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06/18/2003 12:41:24 PM |
| Very nice light, tone and focus...well done...!!!!! Attractive shot. |
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06/18/2003 10:46:34 AM |
| great, great shot. nice lighting and interesting exposure. Very well done, Mom. |
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06/18/2003 04:22:24 AM |
| Not sure if it appeals to me to see someone identify as a "mother of one" rather than as being an individual. It is kind of like being identified as "Tom's girlfriend" rather than "Lisa", if you know what I mean. Otherwise; cool pose, but lacking a little in the contrast side. (5) |
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06/18/2003 02:15:11 AM |
| Nice frame..Nice Pose...good looking model |
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06/18/2003 12:42:14 AM |
| You are SO beautiful! Beautiful portrait as well. I like your choice of soft-focus. |
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