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11/14/2005 02:20:24 PM |
| Your timing on this shot was impeccable. The color of the flame is great, but the lighting on the matchstick is rather flat. I agree with Rikki on the border. The focus is OK but seems a little soft. I also feel the gray background is rather bland and a black background could give more "punch". One other small nitpick is the wordiness of the title. Personally I prefer short titles (for the most part). Your title seems like an attempt to force the image to fit the challenge. |
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11/14/2005 02:14:41 PM |
I haven't looked at other comments so if I'm repeating, then it's how I feel. :) First, I think you did very well with a difficult subject to capture. Flame is always hard to get right. With that being said I think the following hurt your score:
1) The DNMC crew may not have liked this. I'm pretty liberal, but this is a bit of a stretch. It's "out-of-the-box" which can be great, but like I've said before, high risk/high reward.
2) The flame is supersaturated which makes it less interesting. The colors are beautiful, but there is little detail there and the resultant rounded edges make it look less like flame and more like a glow of something.
3) The composition isn't bad at all. I may have actually had the match enter the frame centered and then let the gradual slope move the subject away from the middle. In other words, I may have just shifted the subject down. Rule of thirds is good and all, but sometimes it doesn't work and I think when you have a completely black background centered often works better.
4) Did you use optical zoom for this? It seems just a tiny bit jaggy. Not bad though.
5) I will totally commend you for the lighting on the matchstick. You managed to light that quite well while still controlling for the light of the flame. That is tough.
So bottom line is a fairly well done technical picture which likely fell with the DNMC crowd. (Note the 13 3-scores). The saturation may have been overboard. You did well though with a very difficult to photograph subject. |
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11/12/2005 10:18:09 PM |
| Your exposure is very good. I like the color of the flame. |
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11/12/2005 01:45:23 AM |
| Good macro and timing for this shot! I would get rid of the burgundy border though. It doesn't really help teh image much. 9. |
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11/12/2005 12:03:37 AM |
| Neat catch of the flame. I wonder how many matches you went through. Hopefully you weren't near any smoke alarms while setting this up (ha ha). It appears just a bit pixelated here and there on my screen, but good job overall. |
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11/10/2005 01:52:09 PM |
| How many tries did it take to get this shot? I like it. :) |
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11/09/2005 03:09:44 PM |
| interesting photo, but too much of a stretch to attach it to the theme, in my opinion. |
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