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07/06/2003 07:30:06 PM |
*Critique Club*
General: Very good journalistic shot. Well captured.
[B}Composition: [/B] Good use of diagonal lines. The diagonal line created by the fireman draws the viewer in. Did you try other perspectives? i.e. having the sprinkler just a little more to the left
Exposure: There seems to be a slight loss of detail in the shadows. This could possibly be helped with a 1/3 of a stop more exposure.
Impact: The yellow glow adds impact. The only thing that would add more impact would be to include the fire he is fighting.
Colette
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07/01/2003 12:37:44 AM |
I was shattered to see you did not place in the top three!!!!
Oh no what is the world coming to!! Anyway I think this is the best shot here! |
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06/30/2003 06:30:30 PM |
| I'm glad this placed well, but surprised it does not have a blue ribbon. A really marvelous shot, well composed, and other elements (diagonal lines) that reall add to the drama. I love the colors, too. Super work! |
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06/30/2003 12:13:49 AM |
| incredible image. congrats on 8th! |
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06/29/2003 08:08:06 PM |
| Ok. Please tell me this is a drill. |
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06/29/2003 01:34:07 PM |
| Nice shot. Makes me want to see more of the "scene". |
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06/28/2003 09:42:04 PM |
| Was that a real blaze he was fighting? Very interesting subject. |
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06/27/2003 08:26:19 PM |
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06/27/2003 02:01:53 PM |
| Great capture. Nice simple components to this one make it one of the better ones I've seen for this assignment. |
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06/27/2003 01:08:40 PM |
| Great shot! How did you do it? You don't see shots like this everyday :) |
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06/27/2003 12:51:10 PM |
| Excellent photojournalism shot. 8 |
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06/27/2003 12:32:11 PM |
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06/27/2003 12:02:14 PM |
| You captured the reality of one of the toughest jobs! |
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06/27/2003 12:46:36 AM |
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06/26/2003 05:27:56 PM |
| A little yellow heavy... yes, I know it's a fire, but the brightness seems to wash the pic a bit. |
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06/26/2003 03:43:20 PM |
| Great image, good composition and colors. |
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06/25/2003 10:28:27 PM |
| Real drama here! The diagonal line of shadow really gives this image some implied drama. Color and cropping help, too. 10 |
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06/25/2003 08:45:44 PM |
| Great action photo ! I give it a 9 ! |
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06/25/2003 05:53:57 PM |
| Very dramatic photo. I think seeing more of the fire that he's fighting would make it more dramtic. Still a good effort at capturing someone at work. Good work and luck in the challenge. |
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06/24/2003 10:11:33 PM |
| Look like a rather tense moment. Trying to turn off a natural gas line perhaps. Nice capture. |
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06/24/2003 04:01:15 AM |
| In my top picks....you must have taken big risks to get this one !!! |
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06/23/2003 04:37:18 PM |
| There is no doubt in my mind that this should win the challenge. Great shot, I like: color, the crop, the feeling, composition. WOW |
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06/23/2003 05:15:52 AM |
| What a great subject, captures effort and danger, very attractive photo 9 |
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06/23/2003 12:50:10 AM |
| This is a really an awesome shot. You totally get a feel of the fireman at work, hot and soaking wet. It is almost too bright in the upperleft corner, is that the water spray with fire illuminating it? 9 |
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