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11/17/2005 07:12:18 PM |
| The green "bottle" is actually flare from the camera, not bad though for shooting directly into the sun at wide angle. |
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11/17/2005 09:01:03 AM |
Wow, and you are only 5? Are you sure you're only 5? This is a wonderful overall shot and your parents have every right to be proud of you for this. Hope you don't mind, but I would like to make just a few suggestions in case you decide to enter again. You obviously already have a very good eye for the way the shot should look now comes the fun part of seeing everything that is in the shot and how it can affect the overall picture. There are just a two things that jumped out at me when I looked at this, first was the tilt in the horizon. Mom or Dad can help you with this when you work on your picture afterwards, you can crop it and rotate the picture just a tiny bit so it's all nice and even and you won't lose much of what's around the edges. And the other thing was that green bottle in the lower part. Hard to tell what it is since it's so fuzzy but it is a bit distracting, nothing major though. Actually nothing really wrong with the entire shot, you did really well and you should be very proud. The colors are very nice, good composition (the way it's set up) and very nice, serene setting.
Now, go tell Mommy and Daddy to buy you a nice DSLR camera for Christmas and teach you how to use the editing tools all by yourself! :) Hope to see you around in future challenges!
Deannda |
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11/17/2005 08:36:49 AM |
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11/17/2005 08:18:12 AM |
| I'm proud of you Jade. You have a photograher's eye. Keep shooting! |
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11/17/2005 08:11:35 AM |
| Very good photo Jade, well done!!! |
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11/15/2005 08:53:05 PM |
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11/13/2005 09:20:57 PM |
| This is a nice photo for your first photo challenge. I see in the future another great photographer here. Beautiful, I look forward to seeing more......thanks for sharing your "cold morning" , smiles :) |
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11/13/2005 06:26:47 PM |
| that green "bottle" in the foreground is way too distracting, like it otherwise |
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