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07/08/2003 10:49:43 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
The first thing I noticed about this shot was the beautiful deep, rich colors you have captured. It appears to be early morning, or dusk, but that could just be the "darkness," of the photo. I think if you could have done just one of a couple of things and made it a little lighter, so that more of the details would have "shown" through. a) bump ISO to 100. May add a touch of grain, but I don't know that it would have been noticeable. b) One or two stops lower on the aperture c) a notch or two slower on the shutter speed.
The composition is good in that the chute helps to "anchor" the shot and give the picture a feeling of stability without seeming stagnant. I do find myself wanting to see over it and into the horizon more. I don't know if it would have been possible to have a higher perspective, but that may have added to the shot, if you could have.
Good work, and I hope to see more in future challenges. If you have questions, comments, etc. please feel free to PM me. Best to you.
karmat |
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07/02/2003 09:53:51 AM |
| I had the feeling this looked pretty New Zealandish :-) |
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07/01/2003 08:32:17 PM |
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07/01/2003 10:08:28 AM |
| Nice composition and I like the nicely saturated colors, but think the image could use more exposure. |
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06/30/2003 10:15:20 PM |
| Interesting subject matter. Would have been really great if the loading ramp was actually in use! Unfortunately this shot seems underexposed and I'm not sure that the white border does anything for the photo. |
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06/28/2003 09:27:07 AM |
| Seems little dark to me...neat idea though |
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06/27/2003 08:31:21 AM |
| very clean and clear image. Good colors and shadows. |
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06/26/2003 11:48:11 PM |
| just a bit black on my screen |
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06/26/2003 05:23:01 PM |
| I think this would be better if it were brighter. |
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06/26/2003 12:31:43 PM |
| a little dark, loses detail. |
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06/26/2003 12:57:55 AM |
| A little too dark I think. |
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06/25/2003 11:43:05 PM |
| Typical and common sight in some areas....... refreshes the memory of travel to western States and beef country. I like the darkness...... beautiful rich colour at dusk or dawn? A simple thing made monumental. Good work. |
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06/25/2003 02:58:26 PM |
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06/25/2003 06:09:56 AM |
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06/25/2003 04:52:18 AM |
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06/25/2003 01:07:41 AM |
| Might be my monitor, but the photo is a bit dark. |
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