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The Break
The Break
JohnTF


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Challenge: Triptych (Advanced Editing IV*)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Sigma 70-300mm f/4-5.6 DL Macro Super for Nikon
Location: Pool Table
Date: Nov 13, 2005
ISO: 200
Shutter: 10
Date Uploaded: Nov 13, 2005

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Place: 121 out of 234
Avg (all users): 5.6109
Avg (commenters): 6.4286
Avg (participants): 5.3600
Avg (non-participants): 5.8200
Views since voting: 727
Views during voting: 459
Votes: 275
Comments: 14
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11/20/2005 04:34:35 PM
6 - Like the concept, and while I recall seeing similar shots 'elsewhere' in the past, not sure so if this is original, well done. Criticism; seems to be some gamma/contrast/reduction issues in the reds/oranges. Perhaps a sharper angle, creating a more 'dramatic effect' may have made this better in my opinion. Also, I think more 'movement' in the balls in 1/3 could also have enhanced the effect you have already achieved, but difficult to get this right I imagine. Possibly a different composition, especially in 1 & 3, allowing more balance and visual 'effect', may have also made this better. The light reflection on the balls is detracting/distracting, but could also have been used for added effect, with some 'diffusing', not sure how though. Like the potential here. Frame(s) work well.
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11/18/2005 12:57:14 AM
Very cool concept. I like that. It seems like your white balance is kind of off though. The whites look very yellow to me. Maybe some levels or color adj. could help?
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11/17/2005 05:21:15 PM
Nice composition, the lighting seems slightly off to my eye (too yellow).
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11/17/2005 02:46:32 AM
I feel the white balance is out in this photo. I don't like the yellow cast! It would of been excellent if that had of been addressed.
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11/16/2005 10:34:45 PM
Great concept and shot. Personally, I would prefer a more "accurate" white balance. Good luck!
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11/16/2005 05:14:35 PM
for me a far more natural story-line in this would be: unbroken, cue-ball, the break.
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11/15/2005 02:43:48 PM
Love the idea. Unfortunately, the shot is hampered by the strong yellow overcast.
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11/14/2005 09:09:30 PM
i love it. 9
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11/14/2005 08:30:16 PM
Was this lit with a utility lamp? It looks like it has a terrible yellow cast. The red is oversaturated too (which I find common on digital) The idea is creative and the composition is good. 6
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11/14/2005 08:07:32 PM
nice idea, but the yellow cast to the light dulls the impact you have achived.
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11/14/2005 07:13:08 PM
Original and inventive. I wish I had a pool table!
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11/14/2005 03:58:59 PM
Great shot! I like your composition for each photo. I think the center shot could improve from som increased DOF, and all the shots could be improved by adjusting the color balance/curves. There's a lot of red and yellow here. Nice job!
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11/14/2005 03:19:58 AM
Bingo! Not just a shot with a border slapped over it. Love the colors and the arrangement.
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11/14/2005 01:00:48 AM
Creative, original, well-done. 9
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