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11/20/2005 04:34:35 PM |
| 6 - Like the concept, and while I recall seeing similar shots 'elsewhere' in the past, not sure so if this is original, well done. Criticism; seems to be some gamma/contrast/reduction issues in the reds/oranges. Perhaps a sharper angle, creating a more 'dramatic effect' may have made this better in my opinion. Also, I think more 'movement' in the balls in 1/3 could also have enhanced the effect you have already achieved, but difficult to get this right I imagine. Possibly a different composition, especially in 1 & 3, allowing more balance and visual 'effect', may have also made this better. The light reflection on the balls is detracting/distracting, but could also have been used for added effect, with some 'diffusing', not sure how though. Like the potential here. Frame(s) work well. |
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11/18/2005 12:57:14 AM |
| Very cool concept. I like that. It seems like your white balance is kind of off though. The whites look very yellow to me. Maybe some levels or color adj. could help? |
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11/17/2005 05:21:15 PM |
| Nice composition, the lighting seems slightly off to my eye (too yellow). |
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11/17/2005 02:46:32 AM |
| I feel the white balance is out in this photo. I don't like the yellow cast! It would of been excellent if that had of been addressed. |
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11/16/2005 10:34:45 PM |
| Great concept and shot. Personally, I would prefer a more "accurate" white balance. Good luck! |
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11/16/2005 05:14:35 PM |
| for me a far more natural story-line in this would be: unbroken, cue-ball, the break. |
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11/15/2005 02:43:48 PM |
| Love the idea. Unfortunately, the shot is hampered by the strong yellow overcast. |
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11/14/2005 09:09:30 PM |
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11/14/2005 08:30:16 PM |
| Was this lit with a utility lamp? It looks like it has a terrible yellow cast. The red is oversaturated too (which I find common on digital) The idea is creative and the composition is good. 6 |
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11/14/2005 08:07:32 PM |
| nice idea, but the yellow cast to the light dulls the impact you have achived. |
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11/14/2005 07:13:08 PM |
| Original and inventive. I wish I had a pool table! |
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11/14/2005 03:58:59 PM |
| Great shot! I like your composition for each photo. I think the center shot could improve from som increased DOF, and all the shots could be improved by adjusting the color balance/curves. There's a lot of red and yellow here. Nice job! |
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11/14/2005 03:19:58 AM |
| Bingo! Not just a shot with a border slapped over it. Love the colors and the arrangement. |
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11/14/2005 01:00:48 AM |
| Creative, original, well-done. 9 |
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