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07/05/2003 09:55:50 PM |
*Critique Club*
General: This is a good attempt at a documentary shot. If this is what you were trying to accomplish then you succeeded.
Composition: The fingers are a bit distracting. Showing more teeth and concentrating on either the lower or upper set to emphasize a particular area could possibly improve the composition.
Exposure: In general the exposure is good. There is just one hot spot on a tooth on the upper right. This could probably be corrected by noting where the light is coming from and adjusting the angle accordingly.
Impact: Looking at someones teeth is usually not very appealing (except for a dentist). What might help is isolating one tooth. That said, for the purpose you propose in your comments you could probably succeed with this type of photo.
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07/02/2003 08:08:13 AM |
Sorry about inflicting this image on everyone..... was a bit of a last minute effort, i just found it funny because it was actually a dentists teeth, all be it just after bithday cake!!
Every comment about how much they would hate it if this was a real dentist made me laugh even more!!!!
anyway.... sorry again.... but i guess no one will read this anyway...
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06/28/2003 11:49:36 PM |
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06/28/2003 09:47:45 PM |
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06/27/2003 09:44:56 PM |
| this is why you should brush often.....nice close-up |
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06/27/2003 02:00:16 PM |
| Whoever this is might want to floss more. This is a pretty graphic image of some of the worst teeth I've ever seen, but it doesn't seem to fit the "at work" assignment. This should be on a billboard to show people what happens if they don't take basic care of their teeth. |
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06/27/2003 11:43:13 AM |
| Umm, close up dentristy. Fits the theme without actually showing someone at work. The lighting is a little bright. |
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06/24/2003 12:18:30 AM |
| Well its a close-up! beyond that I do not feel the work part...sorry:( |
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06/23/2003 06:47:29 PM |
| gross, it this is supposed to be a dentist he might want to clean under his fingernails. |
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06/23/2003 04:45:58 PM |
| I hope this is not my dentist, dirt under his finger nails, YUK |
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06/23/2003 04:10:17 PM |
| It cost alot to let fix you two fake tooths... Nice photo.. 7 |
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06/23/2003 12:04:00 PM |
| Interesting picture but not realistic. If this were a dentist or doctor, his nails would be cleaner and/or disposable gloves would be used. |
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06/23/2003 11:14:41 AM |
| yuck, but good photo, except i hope those are not the dentist's hands with those dirty nails |
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06/23/2003 10:19:21 AM |
| Not a bad idea, and certainly unusual.. But I am not sure how much of "people at work" it shows.. I would never have gone to a dentist with fingernails that dirty ;) (4) |
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06/23/2003 10:06:41 AM |
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06/23/2003 05:57:59 AM |
| Ewww, dirty fingernails n'all! Interesting photo. |
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