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11/20/2005 04:58:21 PM |
| Dark but lovely. The swan's reflection is nice, the dark water and landscape are nice. Nice light reflection on the water as well. I'd like to see the entire image be just a bit brighter so that more details stand out. Or, if it stays dark, I'd clone out the people on the other shore because they are too small and dark to really see, IMO. Lovely composition. Winter's here, and this picture really says it. |
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11/20/2005 04:28:33 PM |
| I think you have some wonderful elements captured here. I'm just not sure you have them presented in the best possible light (so to speak). The swan and reflection are wonderful - they are currently too far off to the left IMHO. The object in the middle of the far shore is a distraction, I would clone it out. The sky & reflection is really nice, so it doesn't really matter "where" it is located in the image. Therefore, I would suggest, cloning out the object and shifting everything to the right. Again, I think you have all the elements for a great shot, they're just not quite put together correctly for a masterpiece - know what I mean? Good shot as is, nonetheless. |
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11/19/2005 08:55:15 PM |
| Like the sky reflecting in the ice. Overall colours are a bit dark and murky but it is hard to get good colour when it is so overcast. Maybe try desat on this one and see how it looks in B&W. This would also eliminate the distraction of the red clothing of the person in the BG. |
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11/19/2005 08:30:05 PM |
| Good picture but the people in the bg take away from the main subject. Could be inproved by using a lower angle. Try not to have a horizon line in the middle of the picture. |
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