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12/06/2005 10:20:20 PM |
*Critique Club*
I think you were defiantly thinking outside the normal box with your "Different" entry into the Odd Challenge. I like the approach you chose, they were actually a few different egg ideas out there and your did not look like any of the rest. Also great choice on green apple to draw attention in. I think the photo itself could have used a couple of different things to get voted higher. Possibly the focus seems a little soft, I know how hard focusing can be depending on the environment and subject. The focus also could have been affected by the flash. I might have tried a couple of different angles and perspectives for that different look. Also I might have tried that different angle showing less of your back drop or change the color of your backdrop. The box almost blends into the background. I might even play with adjusting the contrast to give the box more depth. Overall I think you had an excellent idea keep up the good work. |
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11/27/2005 03:13:52 PM |
| Good idea, direct flash lighting isn't eye-pleasing...5 |
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11/26/2005 03:50:13 PM |
| Better focus would help, and maybe some angle. |
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11/25/2005 01:22:56 AM |
| The focus wasn't a very well done job on this shot, I originally gave it a 5, but have to drop it down to a 4 because of that. It's an innovative thought compared to other egg users. The cloth used as a background doesn't work very well for the picture, in my opinion. It needs something that will contrast the container colour. It could have turned out a better shot. That's what I think at least. |
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11/25/2005 01:15:35 AM |
| Is a bit grainy. Interesting idea; would maybe have been a bit better if you'd selected something that fit in the carton. |
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11/23/2005 04:42:55 PM |
| Clever idea, but photo is rather average. Focus is soft, tonal range is 'gray', just not lively. |
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11/23/2005 03:27:38 PM |
| Good idea, but focus could have been sharper, and composition is somewhat dull (too centered). More contrast in background would have helped, too. |
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11/23/2005 10:34:30 AM |
| Out of focus and poor lighting. |
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