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12/08/2005 07:20:39 PM |
****Critique Club****
"Grown up art"
Your photo has a few problems I'd like to address.
1. Lighting - This looks to be all natural light. I would like to see more light highlighting the wall, whether by a reflector or by an additional light source. The wall looks dark and drab with out the additional light. I can see there was some light, as there is a shadow on the lower right hand. The shadow has a tendency, since there is not a specific other place to look, to draw the eye to it.
Using a photo program I'd like to see the texture of the wall brought out more.
2. The wall appears to be curved. I'm not sure if this is teh lens or the actual wall. I would have liked to see the wall more symetrical in the photo with the top equal on each side.
3. The graffiti is something that is more known to be from Teenagers and is not really associated with adults.
Good luck in future challenges. |
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11/28/2005 09:09:10 PM |
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11/28/2005 07:24:02 PM |
| Graffiti as adulthood? Hmmmmm...interesting take on the challenge. |
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11/28/2005 06:03:24 PM |
love the simplicity of this photo's composition. and, since i have a big thing for street art anyway, you know i've gotta dig this one!
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11/28/2005 10:10:10 AM |
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11/28/2005 02:54:38 AM |
| not sure about this, graffitti is more for the young 5 |
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11/28/2005 12:53:06 AM |
| LMAO tooooooo funny, just like MY drawing skillz |
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