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Cooling Towers
Cooling Towers
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Industrial (Basic Editing III)
Camera: HP PhotoSmart 945
Location: Clarksville, Tennessee
Date: Nov 25, 2005
Aperture: 8.0
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/360
Galleries: Architecture
Date Uploaded: Nov 26, 2005

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Statistics
Place: 193 out of 223
Avg (all users): 4.6124
Avg (commenters): 3.2000
Avg (participants): 4.3171
Avg (non-participants): 4.7500
Views since voting: 541
Views during voting: 329
Votes: 258
Comments: 7
Favorites: 1 (view)


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12/09/2005 06:32:08 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club

The blue sky is very striking in this photo. I like the subject you are trying to capture. There are just a few things I think would improve this photo - 1) whenever you think you have your composition, take two steps forward and see if it doesn't get better. I think it would in this case. 2) The focus is off - it's a bright sunny day and I don't understand why the focus is so off. If you use photoshop, you can also sharpen the final image - which would work a bit here.

happy shooting!
Matt
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/06/2005 04:22:46 PM
This is nice, but if it were in sharp focus it would be a lot nicer. Tighter zoom/crop might help also. I love the deep blue sky.
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12/03/2005 07:00:33 PM
I like it! Nice work!
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12/02/2005 11:16:10 AM
eh...
12/01/2005 07:45:49 PM
Looks a little out of focus?
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12/01/2005 08:50:53 AM
This too simplistic and understated. I think it would have been better closer to your subject, or even panned right a bit, the building over there seem more interesting than to the left. Also your horizion is tilted enough to feel uncomfortable.
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11/30/2005 08:06:24 PM
The picture is a bit blurry, it seems as if you took this picture from a moving car.
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