| Author | Thread |
|
|
12/08/2005 08:15:29 PM |
*** Critique Club ***
Composition is dynamic due to the juxtaposition of the bottle and the bill however I feel there is a conflict between these two items. My eye is drawn to the bill since it is the brightest part of the image but am drawn to the bottle since it is the object that is in focus. This may have worked better with the bill in focus and the bottles just slightly out of focus.
Explosure seems right though with true white and black.
Keep shooting.
Colette
|
|
 Photographer found comment helpful. |
Comments Made During the Challenge  |
|
|
12/01/2005 08:44:56 AM |
| Usually I detest softfocus but it works well here, very fitting for the shot. However, "wow" factor is pretty low here but everything about the technique is pretty good. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
11/28/2005 06:00:21 PM |
| like the "past due!" touch in this photo. nicely composed. would have liked the focus to be just a bit sharper. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
11/28/2005 02:45:53 PM |
| imo too much out of focus. why? 3 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
11/28/2005 12:17:25 PM |
| I've been there. nice use of alcohol to actually do something other than site there looking like a pretty bottle. |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
11/28/2005 08:29:19 AM |
| There are quite a few shots like this but with your post editing, you made it interesting. I like the softened label on the tequila bottle and the slightly out of focus of the past due bill. 7 |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
11/28/2005 04:35:00 AM |
| Interesting idea but the out of focus spoils it for me |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
|
|
11/28/2005 03:23:11 AM |
|
| Photographer found comment helpful. |
Home -
Challenges -
Community -
League -
Photos -
Cameras -
Lenses -
Learn -
Help -
Terms of Use -
Privacy -
Top ^
DPChallenge, and website content and design, Copyright © 2001-2025 Challenging Technologies, LLC.
All digital photo copyrights belong to the photographers and may not be used without permission.
Current Server Time: 03/12/2025 05:34:55 PM EDT.
Add photograph to your favorites
Add photographer to your favorites
