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12/07/2005 09:21:47 PM |
| too busy, too haphazard, too chaotic. there's nothing wrong with your technicals, it's just the composition that keeps this image from going anywhere. |
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12/06/2005 01:54:00 AM |
| I think this is a really good idea. The presentation though leaves me with a feeling of wanting a little more though. I'm thinking that the background seems just a little too busy and slightly distracting because of the changing color and textures. The composition could perhaps be a little more dynamic if the subject were framed on a vertical across the photo instead of just laid out on center. Also, although the pink bag is a nice color, I find interest in the makeup items and wish the focus was sharper there than as it is now, sharp on the pink bag. Maybe just a little deeper dof would make a difference. Like I said, I think you've chosen a good subject, that has interest, a good eye, good exposure on the shot. A little more care in the presentation could maybe make a considerable boost in the score. Just my opinion of course :-) |
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