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12/09/2005 06:28:17 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club
The lighting on this image is fantastic. I like the details all around - but that's my only other real gripe. I wish that it was a tad sharper. Unsharp mask would have definitely improved the machinery feel of this. Machinery seems to me - hard, cold - and sharp. Not soft...if that makes sense.
Not sure the image meets the challenge for industrial. Also - try to use the whole 640 pixels on the long side to make your image as large as possible. If you need help resizing it, search the forums. :)
Happy shooting,
Matt |
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12/06/2005 11:47:30 PM |
| 3 - Good potential. Criticism; needs to be at least 640 on one side, in this case height. More context and perhaps even 'straightening', would have made this better in my opinion. Like the toning, works well. |
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12/05/2005 06:39:58 PM |
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12/01/2005 07:35:08 PM |
| interesting direct close up approach |
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12/01/2005 02:42:08 PM |
| seems to be out of focus. no focal point |
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11/30/2005 01:33:52 PM |
| Your car isn't industrial, as far as I can tell. |
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