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12/18/2005 03:42:33 AM |
** Greetings from the Critique Club **
'RR'
Starting with the positive, I like that you thought outside the box and went for a fork in the tracks instead of the silverware type fork. I also like the strong contrast of your image.
The thing that I find most bothersome here is the lack of a strong focus point. My eye is not drawn to the fork in the tracks. I have to search for the meaning here. If the meaning were cold and void, then you would have me. I agree with other commenters that a tighter crop to the tracks, thus less clutter, would be beneficial here.
I hope you find this critique helpful.
- Linda |
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12/11/2005 06:59:00 PM |
| where is the fork/knife/spoon ? |
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12/11/2005 05:35:30 PM |
| The building on the left should have been left out. |
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12/11/2005 07:45:45 AM |
| I'm sorry but I don't see the connection here. The photo on it's own is nothing special either, too dark and pointless in my opinion. |
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12/09/2005 10:57:16 AM |
| This is a bit too dark and the composition might be better IMO. Nice shot though and it meets the challenge. |
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12/08/2005 01:48:51 PM |
| desolate... made me shiver. i like it |
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12/07/2005 08:44:07 PM |
| i dont understand this one |
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12/06/2005 03:11:53 AM |
| I wonder if this could have been made stronger by getting lower and including more of the tracks? |
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12/05/2005 03:31:03 PM |
| I take it that you're illustrating "fork" as in "fork in the road" - it took me a minute to get the link to the challenge. I think that a single fork in the road would have been more illustrative than what looks like part of a switchyard, or what is in any case a more complex arrangement than a branch from one to two lines. overcomplexity is obfuscating your concept. |
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12/05/2005 12:19:33 PM |
well it's a fork, and it's a railroad, and I like the alternative to silverware. But this particular section of track does little for me...sorry. Background too cluttered. I would have cropped just the fork area. Or approached with a lower-angle of attack
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12/05/2005 12:44:46 AM |
| I like this alot. Has a lonely sense to it with the cold and snow. |
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