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Challenge: Knife Fork Spoon (Advanced Editing IV)
Collection: Portfolio
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Location: Wilton, CA
Date: Dec 4, 2005
Aperture: 11
ISO: 100
Shutter: 100
Galleries: Abstract, Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Dec 4, 2005

Cloning, sepia filter, sharpen

Statistics
Place: 46 out of 163
Avg (all users): 5.7552
Avg (commenters): 6.7143
Avg (participants): 5.3721
Avg (non-participants): 6.0660
Views since voting: 845
Views during voting: 339
Votes: 192
Comments: 11
Favorites: 0


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12/17/2005 05:00:00 PM
Critique Club WooooHoooo

Composition:
I love the concept with this photograph. I like how you used the dust of the spoon to emulate crumbs or liquid residue. I also like how the title delivers the concept however there are things in the photograph that I couldnít figure out. One is the knifeís position, it just doesnít seem in the correct position and this could be argued that the focal point is the fork and spoon; however the knife plays a big part with the cutting. I also think maybe showing more of the knife and the fork would have added some visual elements. Maybe using a plate with some color or texture would have enhanced it.

Technical & Set-up:
Overall the setup looks good. Iím assuming that you used some sort of lighting as I see a hot section in the lower right corner. Looking at the histogram I noticed itís exposed towards the highlight side which I can see from the light color of the plate. I do think that maybe adding a second light from the opposite side would have eliminated the black tint on the silverware, as the histogram for the silverware is exposed more towards the Shadows.

Camera Work:
I like the DOF as all the elements in the photograph are in focus.

Post Processing:
As for post processing I donít if there much that can be done except maybe do some levels adjustment on the silverware. This would remove some of the shadows with the silverware.

My Opinion:
This is a very nice photograph the message is very clear. It meets the challenge very well. Overall I would have rated this image between 65-75 out of 100. Well done keep up the good work.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/11/2005 07:41:29 AM
Cool idea.
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12/11/2005 01:17:34 AM
Great concept and well executed.
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12/10/2005 11:19:13 AM
great composition
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12/09/2005 10:21:38 AM
Pretty good technically, yet missing something...
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12/08/2005 02:08:22 PM
Great pic, creative
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12/05/2005 01:59:13 PM
Very creative, well done.
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12/05/2005 12:19:56 PM
creative
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12/05/2005 12:14:57 PM
ingenious!
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12/05/2005 10:51:58 AM
Nice touch having the grain of the spoon in the plate, gives it some realism.
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12/05/2005 05:51:47 AM
GREAT SHOT...but position of knife looks a little unnatural. 6
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