| I couldn't say why, but I think this meets the old challenge there. Composition, however, lets it down for me - the sun betwen the pylons is nice, but the framing of the pylons in your image is clumsy - half-centred, but not cnetred, half-privileged, but not privileged. I think you've falled between giving them more space, and composing tightly to them, and the result feels half-hearted. Groups of subjects are always tricky like that - my feeling is that you either need to treat them as one subject, in which case give them more surrounding and compose for the one subject, or treat them as a pair and try to centre the as a pair, using what symmetry they give you as the strength of the composition. |
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