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12/19/2005 06:38:52 PM |
I think the lighting in the top left is a bit dark, but other than that, not a bad shot. |
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12/16/2005 10:16:14 PM |
Wow...I hope he didn't get caught! Haha Very cute and very dangerous. The reflections are distracting, especially that there isn't one for the mouse. |
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12/16/2005 10:10:26 PM |
I wish the mouse and cheese were just a bit lighter. |
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12/16/2005 09:42:55 PM |
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12/16/2005 07:01:44 AM |
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12/15/2005 12:21:21 PM |
Nice my highest rated photo. Could use a little more fill on the mouse but overall still thought it was one of the best in this challenge. Nice job. |
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12/15/2005 11:51:17 AM |
1/2 focus -- focus is on the corner of the mousetrap, but is clear
2/3 composition (inc. background) Would have liked to have seen more tail on the mouse, and you can see the thread holding the cheese;, otherwise excellent
1/3 color/lighting -- I like the glow from beneath, but unfortunately it places the mouse in heavy shadow. The monochrome look of the picture is suitable and appealing.
2/2 artistry/emotive/WOW factor -- This is cute and it made me smile.
Total score 6/10
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12/15/2005 09:06:37 AM |
I think it would have been more interesting if the tail was in the picture. Still like it. |
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12/15/2005 12:01:30 AM |
Mouse too dark, could have been a 9 |
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12/14/2005 10:29:20 PM |
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12/14/2005 10:00:00 PM |
A cute model but a better name would have been mice. Rats is rather a too aggressive term for such a sweet image. The composition is good but overall good focus is wanting. There are some images whereby we are limited to perfect a capture. So the image has merit on composition and lovely model. Bumping up one notch. |
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12/14/2005 06:37:09 PM |
Nice, I like your unimposing background |
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12/14/2005 03:45:13 PM |
It woudl be cool to capture the rat's tail in this one as well. |
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12/14/2005 03:41:16 PM |
beautiful composition in diagonal, beautiful clearness and beautiful contrast. |
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12/14/2005 01:24:32 PM |
Great shot like the reflection going.... |
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12/14/2005 12:48:14 PM |
Buddy - it's a trap! Run...
Great pic, may be my monitor, but I wish there was a bit more light on the mouse/rat. |
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12/14/2005 11:07:17 AM |
I was going to discuss mouse vs rat, but its too cute. |
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12/14/2005 10:50:13 AM |
Lighting draws attention to the trap rather than to the mouse (which is poorly lit) and cheese. |
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12/14/2005 08:49:55 AM |
easy there! Mouse is tadge underexposed tho |
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12/14/2005 08:06:05 AM |
So your rat is a stand-up comedian! Good arrangement and composition, just wish for a little more focus and light on the mouse. |
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