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Father-Son Bonding
Father-Son Bonding
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Challenge: Say Cheese! (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Olympus D-540 Zoom
Location: Hayden Lake, Idaho
Date: Dec 8, 2005
Aperture: F2.9
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/3 seconds
Galleries: Food and Drink
Date Uploaded: Dec 9, 2005

A cheese father and son. The father and son are made of cheese sticks. The father monterey jack, the son cheeder. The son is in a sled made of flat cheeder cheese. The snow is shreeded Mexican style cheese. The father, son, and sled are kept together with toothpicks. Edit steps: upped the brightness and contrast by 30, applied a 2.0 gaussian blur, resized to 500 by 375, than saved.

Statistics
Place: 89 out of 107
Avg (all users): 3.9039
Avg (commenters): 3.7778
Avg (participants): 3.8136
Avg (non-participants): 3.9279
Views since voting: 890
Views during voting: 400
Votes: 281
Comments: 29
Favorites: 0


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01/24/2006 01:51:49 PM
Brandon-

Seems as a majority of your comments are about the focus. Just thought I would throw a couple of pointers your way, if you don't mind.

1. Most cameras have a focus lock, usually by pressing the shutter button halfway. Make sure the focusing point(usually the center circle) is over whatever you want in focus, then with the focus locked arrange your composition.

2. You took your photo at 1/3 of a second, this is next to impossible to handhold steady. If you don't have a tripod, improvise and look for something to set the camera on that will keep it in the proper position and then use the camera's timer.

One more tip...always watch your foreground and background, they can make or break your photo.

Hopefully I told you something you didn't already know. If I didn't just blow me off. If I said something that doesn't make sense or just sounds stupid feel free to send me a PM.

Good Luck and Happy Photographing.

~Mark
 Comments Made During the Challenge
12/20/2005 06:45:20 PM
Tad blurry/oof, love the original thought!!
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12/20/2005 04:17:32 AM
Almost acceptable focus. On the wall behind.
Sorry, bad mood. All I wanted to say is your focus is off.
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12/20/2005 03:27:35 AM
The overall picture is out of focus. Try to focus on one important aspect of your picture (e.g. father's face).
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12/20/2005 01:33:35 AM
OUT OF FOCUS ...
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12/19/2005 08:12:11 PM
focus.
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12/17/2005 09:23:20 PM
I like the idea and the creativity. I wish the photo was in focus. The lighting is a little harsh.
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12/17/2005 01:50:37 PM
Lacks sharpness and focus. Also, I would suggest trying a background, even if its just sheets of construction paper or poster board, to eliminate distracting backgrounds. It looks like you just set this on your dining room table and took a snapshot.
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12/16/2005 10:49:19 PM
With just a touch better focus, this would be a good one! Nice idea.
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12/16/2005 09:20:19 PM
This shot is out of focus
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12/16/2005 09:15:11 PM
Great idea but the background is definitely a big negative here.
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12/16/2005 02:27:08 PM
You went through a lot of trouble setting this up for that I give you lots of points, however the focus is not very good and you could have chosen a better background...
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12/16/2005 12:57:04 PM
The chhese is out of focus while the background is in focus. Try composing it with a dark soft backdrop.
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12/15/2005 11:12:53 PM
Quite out of focus. Also, the lighting looks too harsh. It's unfortunate, as your subject is really quite appealing. 3.5...I'll have to round down to a 3. Sorry.
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12/15/2005 08:22:24 PM
interesting idea, good light direction.
unfortunately it is out of focus, a most important element. Another thing that would improve it would be to put up a background like a large black board or sheet of paper or light-absorbing velvet.
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12/15/2005 12:33:14 AM
focus/sharpness...
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12/14/2005 10:58:31 PM
Such a shame about the soft focus. I also think the composition and the lighting could have been improved.
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12/14/2005 06:46:05 PM
Creative idea but it's too out of focus to score well.
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12/14/2005 04:48:30 PM
out of focus...
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12/14/2005 04:43:31 PM
Out of focus
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12/14/2005 04:11:17 PM
composition not very required and the blur is I suppose artistic.
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12/14/2005 03:40:44 PM
A little too blurry and complicated.
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12/14/2005 03:18:21 PM
Focus needs improvement.
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12/14/2005 02:58:57 PM
out of focus and would have been better with a blank background
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12/14/2005 11:17:11 AM
Wonderfully on topic, just a shame about the focus and background
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12/14/2005 09:48:11 AM
The picture is not sharp, while the preparation and subject is nice ;.)
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12/14/2005 09:17:36 AM
The focus on this is too soft.
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12/14/2005 08:49:06 AM
lol - a bit blurry though
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12/14/2005 12:24:25 AM
That would be a great shot if it wasn't blurry. But cute concept all the same...
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