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12/27/2005 07:31:50 PM |
| I think there's too much light above the navel. I think the DOF could be a bit more shallower. Also, using a real model would've made the picture much more provocative. |
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12/25/2005 12:35:43 PM |
| It took me a second to find evidence of shallow DOF in this. I actually like this composition quite a bit. I like the panties used as a design element with the unorthodox amount of empty space above (I'm find of this type of composition although I prefer a narrower, more vertical frame when utilizing it). Sadly, I don't really think shallow DOF does anything to enhance this composition. It actually detracts from the what could be a crisp and clean graphic statement. For this composition to work really well the focus needs to be very crisp and the pink needs to really be separate from the white. I would enjoy seeing this done again with a vertical frame and very sharp focus, no shadows,and a perfectly spotless white background so that it appears as one graphic statement. |
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12/21/2005 06:28:31 PM |
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12/21/2005 01:37:03 PM |
| seems as if a verry strong USM was applied to this...i think it does not read as having a strong focal point and should be reshot to be made more clear |
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