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 This image was disqualified from the City Life II challenge.
the promise of a generation
the promise of a generation
mattvardy


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: City Life II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6 USM
Location: Whitby, ON
Date: Dec 29, 2005
Galleries: Urban, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Jan 2, 2006

File Name
IMG_2223.JPG
Camera Model
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XT
Shooting Date/Time
12/29/2005 3:14:46 PM (corrected, camera was set wrong. Joey Lawrence will be my witness :)
Shooting Mode
Program AE
Tv( Shutter Speed )
1/320
Av( Aperture Value )
13.0
Metering Mode
Evaluative Metering
Exposure Compensation
0
Disqualification Details
Your photograph must be taken after the challenge is announced. Your camera's date and time must be set to correspond with your local timezone. Please review the challenge submission rules.

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01/12/2006 05:23:53 PM
You'd think Joey would've stressed the date stamp to you, afterall, he got two DQ's in a row for it, haha! Naughty you for pasting Alfred Hitchcock in there, his well-known profile is probably before your time. ;-)

You'll get your ribbon soon enough!
Cheers
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01/11/2006 08:08:56 PM
Originally posted by mattvardy:


There is proof though that this was taken on the date specified. I'm prety sure Joey has an image of me taking this in real time, and I'm sure his settings are always correct.

freaken n00bs ;-)
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01/11/2006 07:07:10 PM
Yes it was a shame guys, but a common mistake for a newbie I guess. Finally made sure my date and time was set properly today for future challenges.

There is proof though that this was taken on the date specified. I'm prety sure Joey has an image of me taking this in real time, and I'm sure his settings are always correct. Nonetheless, like kiwiness pointed out, I understand now that even if the date was correct, it would have been dq'ed because of the man.

Sorry guys, but I have no idea why you are all mentioning Alfred Hitchcock. This is just some random overweight man added from another shot of mine lol... I will have to look Alfred up on google ;-P

If I ever make a large print of this I will be sure to bring back some texture in the clouds and move the man a bit to the left so the 3 elements (smoke stacks and man) are equidistant from each other and the edge of frame - for more symmetry.

Thanks to all for your generous comments and rates.
01/11/2006 07:51:48 AM
sad, because this was one of my fav's!
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01/11/2006 03:47:53 AM
Cool photo, shame about the date thing. But if it hadn't been for the date you probably would have been DQ'ed for adding the man in with Photoshop like you mentioned here on Photonet,

Message edited by author 2006-01-11 03:48:05.
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01/11/2006 02:55:12 AM
Pity for the DQ, but, anyway, this is a very nice photo.
Is the guy there Alfred Hitchcock? :-)
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01/11/2006 12:28:24 AM
sorry about the DQ, I thought this was spectacular, and gave it a 10 for what it's worth
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
01/08/2006 12:20:17 PM
I think if you crop it so that the middle chimney and the figure are equidistant from the vertical edges it looks better. but everything else looks great
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01/08/2006 04:39:29 AM
Oversmoothed, this shot has lost some of its impact through an obsession with the processing. It looks like everything is in place though; poignancy, scale, context, composition, but my eyes crave the missing texture.

A empathise totally with the point you make here, so top marks for the social comment.
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01/08/2006 01:49:01 AM
Hmmm I wonder where the man came from. :-D

It's the thought that counts
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01/07/2006 10:08:08 PM
Wow, Absolutely fantastic. Love the title and the clouds. Excellent!
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01/07/2006 04:25:19 PM
Highly dramatic with limited tones but making each shade count to bring about a great b/w study.
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01/07/2006 12:04:38 PM
very mysteriouse! I love it!!
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01/06/2006 09:05:08 PM
Wonderful shot, my favorite so far. Might be even better in color
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01/06/2006 08:24:23 PM
Personally, I'd have liked to see just a bit more contrast in the image, but, nevertheless, it's absolutely superb. The aforementioned "more contrast" would have made it a "10"; nonetheless, it's earned its "9." (By the way, who is that: Hitchcock? Lol. [Sorry if it's you; not making fun ΓΆ€” :-D].)
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01/06/2006 07:24:04 PM
Wow this is surreal.
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01/06/2006 06:16:09 PM
the dude makes this shot... verrry nice
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01/06/2006 05:50:34 PM
whoa! pretty awesome.. this picture says so much. great use of negative space. is that Hitchcock?lol..
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01/06/2006 02:24:56 PM
Nicely done. Powerful image. The figure watching the smoke adds a lot.
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01/06/2006 01:51:12 PM
I really liked this, the massive smoke plumes, the black and white, the perspective, the scale that dwarfs the human figure. The only thing I would wish for is more focus and definition in the smome itself
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01/06/2006 10:58:06 AM
I love this. The smoke added with the silhouette of the man on the right. Very nice touch!
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01/06/2006 06:59:50 AM
Nice
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01/06/2006 04:42:59 AM
Nice composition, the lone figure adds the "life" in this. Colour might have been nice too. 9
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01/06/2006 04:36:53 AM
Nice image. Giving it a 9. Not sure how well it says city life. I think it does but not sure about my fellow DPCers.
Good Luck

Kev
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01/06/2006 01:58:58 AM
is this on deviantart?
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01/06/2006 01:09:42 AM
this looks really neat in black and white. is that the silhouette of a person to the right?? i do believe it is. cool!
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01/06/2006 12:50:06 AM
Great shot..looks like Hitchcock looking on..eerie..
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01/05/2006 01:24:25 PM
this images is amazing! my favorite photo of this contest
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01/05/2006 12:09:28 AM
Great unusual subject, and great exposure!
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01/04/2006 09:54:03 PM
wow, what a capture, I like the title and the composition and minimalistic approach
good luck
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01/04/2006 09:05:50 PM
that is one freakin cool picture
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01/04/2006 08:10:48 PM
Composition is ok. The choice of subject matter is ok. The image quality is ok. Could have been a little more creative. - 5
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01/04/2006 06:27:16 PM
WOW... Strong statement. Love it. Powerful image. Great job.
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01/04/2006 05:52:45 PM
A surreal, dreamy image. My favourite of the challenge and my pick for the Blue Ribbon. Fantastic image! Good luck! [10]
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01/04/2006 03:27:40 PM
great composition 9
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01/04/2006 03:09:03 PM
Nice, but where is the city?
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01/04/2006 01:52:46 PM
beautiful!!!!!!
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01/04/2006 11:40:20 AM
oooh. fat guy.
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01/04/2006 06:17:18 AM
perfect composition! love the standing man, so perfect.
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01/04/2006 01:05:56 AM
Is that Alfred Hitchcock over to the right?????
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