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07/22/2003 09:17:18 PM |
Hi from the Critique Club~
Focus - it could be better. What is the main subject here? The man on the left of the coke bottle is very blurry and distracting because he has no light on him and he's in the way. Maybe if you cropped the whole left side of the picture and left only the bottle you'd have a better picture.
Lighting/color - it's hard to use night lighting that you can't control, but you did well here. The men are well lit at the end but too far away. Although this is an interesting picture, it would be so much more interesting if I could see their faces, see what they are like, meet them, you know?
Good picture, keep shooting!
Mav |
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07/16/2003 06:23:57 AM |
thanx a lot guys, i'm not photographer... but i'll be some day =)
thanx for ou criticize. i'll do a better job next time ;) |
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07/15/2003 09:11:59 PM |
| I like the DOF, a great scene! |
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07/15/2003 09:23:19 AM |
| Cool shot, like the perspective |
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07/12/2003 02:48:52 AM |
| With a higher aperature, you could have caught the coke bottle as well. |
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07/11/2003 12:29:23 PM |
| Loose the coke and you have a shot... |
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07/09/2003 06:29:54 AM |
| Nothing like an elegant night out! Quirky shot - I like it. |
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07/09/2003 04:01:50 AM |
| To heighten MY interest, you coud crop a little more of the foreground, and give a sharper focus on the guy looking at the camera. |
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