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07/14/2003 03:14:27 PM |
CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
Me again. Actually, I had Club put this back in the pile so someone else could get it, then waited a day, and STILL got it. Either I am the only one doing cc's (doubtful) or it is "just meant" for me to critique this picture. Whichever way it is ----
Technically, this is a good picture. The focus is good as you can really see the texture in a lot of the areas, and the grain is visible. Sometimes it is tempting to oversharpen a shot like this, but this does not seem the case. The lighting and color tones are good as well.
Compositionally, I find myself focusing on the hicky-didge in the end of the square rail. As a result, I am wondering if perhaps, using that as your subject and getting closer wouldn't have made for a more interesting composition and more of an unanswered question. If you want to include the entire stack, I think more context is needed to really make the composition stronger.
Overall, I think you have a good idea, but it leaves me feeling a little lacking as for the "challenge." The picture is technically sound and the only thing I would really try to change is the composition.
Best to you in future challenges.
Your personal critiquer,
karmat
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07/12/2003 01:41:08 PM |
| Nice idea, and the composition is verynice as we can see a variety of things this firewood once was. |
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07/11/2003 03:36:06 PM |
| Railroad ties? In places the detail is pretty good, but other spots seem less clear. Not a lot of contrast (needs more). It needs something to say "wow, look at me!", but there's just not much here. 7 Rob the Swash |
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07/09/2003 02:29:54 AM |
Damn whatever it was, it was freaking old. Maybe a barn? I like the hints in the pic like the hinge in the upper right, and the S shaped support thingy on the post in the bottom right. Very good shot!!! 8.
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07/07/2003 03:40:56 PM |
| This is a shot with some interest but without too many questions in my mind. 6 Jak |
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07/07/2003 09:01:42 AM |
| Shows you have a good imagination and a keen eye. 8 |
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07/07/2003 06:37:30 AM |
| Railway ties. Actually it's dangerous to burn those, the cresote is carcenogenic. 6 |
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07/07/2003 03:06:44 AM |
| a tree.. Sorry, lost without the title |
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07/07/2003 01:51:18 AM |
| actually, it made me think of something not fitting in--- an outcast. Nice pic. |
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