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07/16/2003 02:23:44 PM |
*Critique Club*
It's definately an interesting image. Can't decide which works better with it they way you have it or if it would have worked better cropping everything out but your Mom and letting it appear as if she was floating in mid air.
Not matter which you would do it still leaves some unanswered questions about the photo.
I am guessing this was a pond and that is how you got the water so dark. Your focus here is really good not only are your toes in focus so is your Mom.
It really is a cool interuptation for the challenge. Nicely done.
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07/12/2003 12:00:47 AM |
| Really interesting shot. I find the reflection and shadow in the lower right corner a little distracting, but it is very minor and I had to work hard to even find that suggestion. |
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07/11/2003 04:33:12 PM |
| Why would this need to be validated by the administrators? Great picture. |
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07/08/2003 07:33:18 AM |
| I love the angle of this shot and the subjects - well done |
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07/08/2003 03:32:14 AM |
| Great looking shot. I like the composition. How did you ever get the water so black without darking the white visor. |
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07/07/2003 05:24:36 PM |
| I love the photographer's feet in this shot, and the relaxed expression on the floater's face. Very tranquil. |
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07/07/2003 03:47:18 PM |
| cool shot, i think you should of cropped your toes out tho. |
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07/07/2003 01:12:15 PM |
| I see your piggies. Painted piggies may I add. |
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07/07/2003 03:01:52 AM |
| title gives too much away! |
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07/07/2003 02:11:22 AM |
| great perspective. WOuld be even better without your feet. |
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07/07/2003 01:08:40 AM |
If the title is supposed to put the viewer in mind of a body found floating (many police shows seem to refer to corpses in the water as floaters), then the composition would have had more impact if the subject were dressed for work or religious service or something other than swimming. The artists toes in the frame also hint that this was a day at the lake as she (?) isn't dressed to pull a corpse from the river.
Good idea though. |
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