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01/18/2006 07:24:25 PM |
Hi from the CC
First impression: The sharpness and color of the front ball is impressive. The title takes a second but is a clever touch. Back ball seems a little to out of focus and my eyes keep wandering back to it and trying to connect it to the jade.
Composition: Good crop which accentuates the relationship between the two balls. I would suggest a little more white space around the jade ball, especially to the left. I also feel the two shapes would have worked more strongly if the blue ball was moved a little to the left in your frame as well. I would like to see the blue ball just a bit more in focus.
Color and lighting: Great color, good white balance and I like the shadows cast by your lighting. More diffusion of the light to minimize reflections on the jade would have enhanced image IMO.
Challenge: both stones look like they have wonderful color and detail. I think either one would have worked well as a focal point. You met the challenge well and good luck on your next one. |
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01/15/2006 01:34:31 AM |
| I just love the foreground ball and so I keep wanting more of the rear one. I can't see what relationship you mean for the two of them and so keep feeling it would be better without the blue one. |
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01/14/2006 08:29:47 AM |
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01/14/2006 12:41:36 AM |
| Nice shot. Great use of DOF to create dimension in this photo. And the creative composition creates a very modern and artistic feel. I could see this hanging in the living room a contemporary home.... 7 |
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01/09/2006 10:21:23 PM |
| Fun title & nice DOF. A bit less reflection on the green sphere would be nice. |
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01/09/2006 12:19:49 PM |
| I think I would have preferred the blue ball to be at the front and in focus since that's the brighter colour... |
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01/09/2006 12:46:55 AM |
| HEE HEE I like the title. Clever take. |
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01/09/2006 12:18:40 AM |
| Composition is ok. The choice of subject matter is ok. The image quality is ok. |
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