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01/17/2006 09:46:41 PM |
Looks like a great cheesecake. Would like to see more of it and less of the backround. The backroung is to distracting. |
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01/17/2006 08:11:44 PM |
Cheesecake looks awesome. The background and countertop detract a bit from the subject. The busy-ness is distracting. I think a solid or more 'out of focus' background would help. |
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01/17/2006 05:47:01 PM |
Yeah! is right - great DOF - and nice macro shot :) |
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01/17/2006 03:57:29 PM |
background is too distracting |
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01/17/2006 06:22:15 AM |
Hmmm, I love cheesecake (unless it's grapefruit cheesecake). But I'm not sure about the point of view - it almost looks like it's on the floor. |
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01/16/2006 04:52:54 PM |
i could be mistaken, but isn't that a little hair on top??? |
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01/16/2006 04:46:28 AM |
I thought this was on the floor, but closer examination reveals that it is on a counter. I think. |
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01/15/2006 07:12:51 PM |
Too much going on in the background |
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01/15/2006 06:37:16 PM |
Nothing overexposed, has good detail in the focused area and the shallow DOF is good. Looks like there may be a tiny hair at the top of the cheesecake that should have been removed. Some viewers will be confused about the shot takn from floor level and that the background, which takes up pleanty of real estate, seems unrelated to the cake. |
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01/15/2006 04:53:58 PM |
background is distracting |
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01/14/2006 11:58:06 PM |
It's a strange choice of framing; the subject looks more like mouse-bait, than cheese-cake. The background, also, could have been thrown more out of focus. |
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01/14/2006 09:49:55 AM |
The cheesecake looks good but doesn't get the immediate attention which is drawn to the OOF background. Change the crop to have less background and add a strawberry or something to make the picture pop. |
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01/14/2006 09:35:28 AM |
That looks like some real tasty cheesecake. I feel the background is a bit distracting though. That big white blob with 6 dark spots draws more attention than the cheesecake. I like the depth of field, but the background should have ingredients or pots and pans used to make the cheesecake. |
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01/14/2006 08:22:59 AM |
The thing about food pictures is that the food has to, 95% of the time, look good to eat. In this image, I think you failed that. The composition and depth of field are excellent, but the cheesecake itself is rather odd and unappetizing. I think the problem lies with the color balance or maybe the lighting. The technical aspects of this are good, I just can't imagine myself eating this particular peice of cheesecake. 5 - good luck in the challenge! |
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01/13/2006 08:56:20 PM |
Great DOF although the background may have been better if it were more blurry, just an opinion. 8 |
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01/13/2006 02:42:09 PM |
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01/12/2006 06:57:19 PM |
the background is too distracting |
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01/12/2006 02:06:18 PM |
There is a lot of texture in the cheesecake. The background is distracting. |
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01/12/2006 01:09:44 PM |
at first I thought your cake was on the floor. Now I figure it's on the counter. It kind of suggests a story without providing enough of one. |
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01/12/2006 12:16:06 PM |
This looks yummy but why does it look like it is on the floor? |
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01/11/2006 07:38:27 PM |
erm seems a little strange to have the cake on the floor.... nice sharp picture though |
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01/11/2006 06:01:56 PM |
I don't like the background, too distracting. |
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01/11/2006 05:10:58 PM |
on the floor?? I'm confused by this shot. |
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01/11/2006 02:59:04 PM |
It looks to me like the cheesecake is on the floor (and it might be on a countertop but it's hard to tell). I would prefer if you focused more on the cake and didn't have such a huge area in your photo out of focus and not important to the subject. |
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01/11/2006 01:02:34 AM |
I like the cheesecake (more would be good). I like the out-of-focus kitchen, but the window destroys the image. |
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